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Fewer Hugs

When you can no longer bend down to pick something up or take your best gal for a stroll in the park And putting your socks on is a battle royale ruining your morning and your remaining morale When two minutes in the sun sets you to sweating you lament that from life you’re not getting any roses or tulips, but instead a pair of blue lips from moaning and groaning at the aches in your two hips Why not cheer up, my good friend – God must really love you to pay you such attention, every minute he hugs you… … Well, pardon me, if you will, but I’d prefer fewer hugs if God really loved me, He’d just pull the plug

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Date: 8/7/2025 10:14:00 PM
Let it out, Baby, speak for the peps who are pass peaked and the health they leak. We have to laugh, we must, and avoid mirrors because on the inside we look the same, can't avoid body limitations though because they feel bad outside and inside. You need to rhyme your 1st couplet so it matches the rest, my thought to achieve satire perfection, reversing up and something should make that easy. Feel free to erase my suggestion, just not all of me, it might hurt. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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