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The form is Triversen

Delirious desires cackle while spectres whirl senselessly On oceans' savage sway blankets drenched delusion Humane hands, soft spoken words strengthen Fickle health, a seesaw feeds erratic mind with despair *** June 8, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/11/2017 9:20:00 PM

Yeeow. Fantastic write my friend! xomo

Darren White
Date: 6/12/2017 12:30:00 AM

hahaha, thanks mo

Dean Wood

Date: 6/9/2017 6:43:00 PM

Evocative, most of us have been there. I wish you good health and soon friend. - Dean

Darren White
Date: 6/10/2017 1:35:00 AM

Thank you, Dean :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/9/2017 7:24:00 AM

Feverish dreams, now these I do know, and they are not pretty. Get better soon dear friend...Maria

Darren White
Date: 6/9/2017 7:27:00 AM

Indeed. Ridiculous high fever produces fodder for poetry ;)

Sara Ella

Date: 6/9/2017 4:57:00 AM

Hope today you are back home :) This one describes so well - fevered dreams.

Darren White
Date: 6/9/2017 5:14:00 AM

Yeah, they let me go home now, phew :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2017 8:19:00 PM

Not fun!

Darren White
Date: 6/9/2017 12:40:00 AM

No! :)

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/8/2017 1:46:00 PM

oh this describes fever dreams quite nicely! I love the alliteration in this.

Darren White
Date: 6/8/2017 1:52:00 PM

Becca, thank you. I'm delighted that you like my poem :)

Frank Sheehan

Date: 6/8/2017 1:30:00 PM

Nice write. I enjoyed the depth and scope of the poem.

Darren White
Date: 6/8/2017 1:50:00 PM

Frank, I am happy you like my poem :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/8/2017 9:13:00 AM

A beautiful piece drips from the abyss...healthy thoughts and sunshine headed your way

Darren White
Date: 6/8/2017 12:42:00 PM

Thanks Tim, I can go home later tonight :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/8/2017 6:40:00 AM

Fever driven poetry. This is so cool, your style and talent always shine no matter what. Here's hoping you feel better soon my friend. I am pulling for you

Chris Green
Date: 6/8/2017 7:22:00 AM

Something like that. : )

Darren White
Date: 6/8/2017 7:17:00 AM

Hehe, yeah, even that works from time to time. Thanks my friend! ("Pulling for you," is that the same as "rooting for you"?)