Feud--2

Fiery, vicious, ire-filled dispute
Ferocious, savage, shocking fight
Flagrant show of hate so acute
Frightful, vitriolic blight

Forgoes any chances to mend
Forsakes God's command: Let hate end.
Fails to deal with furor's root.



June 4, 2018, entered in Joseph May's Pleiades Contest

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Al Juman

Date: 7/4/2018 12:00:00 PM

beautifully composed--Very nice

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/4/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thanks so much, Al! Janice

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/24/2018 7:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Well done.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2018 8:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan! Janice

Roy Pett

Date: 6/24/2018 5:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Janice, so well written. :))

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Roy! Janice

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/23/2018 10:13:00 AM

The many f-sounds lend your poem a fitting ferocious tone . congratulations on your win

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/23/2018 8:46:00 PM

Thanks so much, Agnes! Janice

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/23/2018 12:06:00 AM

Nicely said, 'Let this end' ... Congratulations, Janice ...

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thanks so much, Probir! Janice

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2018 4:30:00 PM

Those feuds never seem to end!..Congrats on your win Janice..

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:02:00 AM

Thanks so much, Joseph, for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem!! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 4:18:00 PM

Hey, you got a TOP WIN. Congrats for you, my friend!!! well deserved.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:03:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2018 7:54:00 PM

Janice, I found a poem I was waiting to give her but had never posted. I am gonna post it later for THIS plieades contest!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/8/2018 8:39:00 PM

Good idea. I've done the same thing--or revised one for a contest. Actually, I'm revising one right now and thinking I could have written one or two new ones by now! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2018 6:11:00 PM

well done!! Do you remember the lady giving us contests on this form. She was halfway through the alphabet and then just stopped!!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2018 6:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Yes, I was enjoying her contests! Janice