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Festering Wound

One word, thoughtless voiced, can pierce like a dart. Unknown to those who ventilate can leave festering wounds upon a fragile heart. You spurt out things and deem you're being smart. Think it doesn't hurt? You're being so naive; One word, thoughtless voiced, can pierce like a dart. It's far, far so easy to tear apart clueless that the other could receive festering wounds upon a fragile heart. A stranger, lover, teller at Walmart; Don't yell or rant because you have a peeve. One word, thoughtless voiced, can pierce like a dart. An argument there was no need to start; because in the end, what did it achieve? Festering wounds upon a fragile heart Pause a moment before you speak, restart; think about your words, do not disbelieve; one word, thoughtless voiced, can pierce like a dart festering wounds upon a fragile heart. Pick-A-Title, Vol 29 - Poetry Contest placed 3rd Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Date wrote: 12th March 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/2/2022 8:42:00 AM

Congrats on the high finish, Terry. A difficult form, but you handled it well. A lot of wisdom in your words. Thank you, for sharing your poetry with us, Bill

Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:07:00 AM

Thank you, Bill, I really appreciate your comments, Terry.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/1/2022 10:22:00 PM

"One word, thoughtless voiced, can pierce like a dart." Why do we not all take one more second or two before we speak?

Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:11:00 AM

I agree Caren, thank you for visiting.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/30/2022 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. So true. Words can hurt more than anyone will ever know. Think then speak. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:24:00 AM

It is indeed true, Paula; thank you so much for your kind comments

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/28/2022 7:12:00 AM

In such a gorgeous Form, Terry, you have created a beautiful message! Excellent use of language! Congratulations on your contest's well-deserved win.

Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 11:22:00 PM

Beautiful poem written in Villanelle form. Congratulations!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2022 1:54:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/27/2022 10:42:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this top-notch Villanelle poem, Terry:-) Bravo!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2022 1:55:00 AM

Thank you, Edward, for the comment, placement, and for running the competition

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/13/2022 9:15:00 AM

Terry, you crafter a beautiful message in such a lovely form! Great choice of words! Good luck in the contest !!!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/13/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Mike

Deb M

Date: 3/12/2022 9:15:00 PM

Indeed it can Terry….mutual respect makes such a difference! Loved this poem. Cheers Deb x

Terry Miller
Date: 3/13/2022 9:28:00 AM

Yes indeed Deb, thank you for your kind comment.

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2022 7:39:00 PM

This is so meaningful and beautifully composed. Yes, a thoughtless word can sometimes pierce a heart like a dart ! All the Best in the contest, Terry !

Terry Miller
Date: 3/13/2022 9:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/12/2022 1:36:00 PM

Ah, Terry, this is so good, and especially good for the contest. I wish you the very best. This should move right up toward the top!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/13/2022 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Milt I always appreciate your comments.