Fervent Ventings of a Fellow Ant

You humans walk about with ease 
With no care nor mere concern
Where every step could maim or kill
And pilage upon return

Whether consciously or unaware 
Your ignorance is noted 
Oblivious to basic laws of motion
Where walking equates to floating 

You boast of sciences and their  order
Superior to all that lives then!
Yet upon much closers inspection 
You thieve progress from our nests 

What you do not know is undiscovered 
As If it was always concealed in view
But your vanity and arrogance
Made what was plain seem undiscovered

Education is the key THEY SAID 
And so observe wat more to learn 
We have no formal education 
Yet it is our knowledge that you yearn 

Our cities require no government 
Nor our storehouses a cooler 
Our population knows no census 
Yet all sleep  with full-cropped bellies 

Our currency of order requires neither rates nor  taxes
Prepared for every season our larder is stocked by and far 
How sexist can we be when our monarch is always a Queen? 
Is not discrimination amongst ourselves what stunts unity and progression! 

Tiniest of all beings yet the most enthusiastic  workers
About from the ascension of Our Lady till the chill that summoms phantism 
Our industriousness is favoured such as the work ethic we possess
Watch, carefully observe, learn from us and you will prosper 

Imagine what we could do if we were you with all this knowledge
We'd bring order to the world and calm to all chaos
Maybe now you know to lose the botox that stiffens up your necks 
Look down more timeously and remember we too are beings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/25/2016 9:29:00 AM
Nice write Sizwe. Society has a lot to learn but I think humans and ants have more in common with each other than you think.
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thanks James... we are more alike than we care to admit. Poetry should make all of us think deeper or else it loses sway
Date: 4/24/2016 1:47:00 PM
Cleverly expressed, Sizwe. We have a lot to learn from simple creatures like these; our life would be much better! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Paul... truer words have been spoken but not meaningful as these
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