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Feral Hearts

Whereas hearts are led by loving's blindness and feral moans drift idly on the wind rendering those stricken deaf and mindless their voyage - sweet beginning of no end Full sails, distant horizons, cresting seas winds rippling the canvas short of gale a shiver of timbers - buckling of knees a crumbling of vows they wouldn't let fail Yet hearts encompass a passion - a will to scream at the night - to curse their own tears to challenge the wind until it goes still to cherish the mast - to conquer love's fears The taming of the feral heart must be to love and in the loving set it free 10/4/2020 Love Sonnet Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/21/2020 6:07:00 AM
Congrats John-- a superb write.
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Date: 10/19/2020 11:57:00 PM
Some powerful emotions, John. Loved your maritime imagery. Your couplet ties it together nicely with some deep wisdom. Congrats on your winning sonnet ~ John
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Date: 10/19/2020 10:56:00 AM
This is a metaphorical delight, such plays on words, loved this one John, congrats on a great win!
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Date: 10/5/2020 7:10:00 PM
A great write, John! I love the way this is penned. Good luck on the contest. :) ~Angie
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John Lawless
Date: 10/6/2020 5:52:00 AM
I appreciate the visit Angela. glad you enjoyed the Sonnet.
Date: 10/5/2020 2:18:00 PM
Awesome, visually striking, Aloha! William
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John Lawless
Date: 10/6/2020 5:51:00 AM
Hey William, thanks for stopping to comment and for your kind words
Date: 10/5/2020 1:48:00 PM
wow, a love sonnet so deep and so original!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/6/2020 5:49:00 AM
the depth of love lays hidden in its turmoils and its triumphs.
Date: 10/4/2020 4:09:00 PM
oh wow...love it! :)
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John Lawless
Date: 10/6/2020 5:47:00 AM
Thanks Susan, after 40+ years of marriage(to the same woman) love takes on many faces and facets.

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