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Feng Shui

A mirror hanging on a wall May be bewitching to us all At the foot of the stairs Best arrange your affairs As Pride goeth before a fall!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2020 3:56:00 PM

Good one. I got a little laugh. I appreciate you stopping by my page and taking time to comment. Sara

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/21/2020 1:23:00 PM

Mahalo, Sara! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/19/2020 9:33:00 PM

And who is most fair? The one who makes it down the stairs (in glass slippers)!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/20/2020 1:16:00 PM

Aye, I suspect most people would like at the mirror instead of the stairs. Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/19/2020 3:14:00 PM

Ah! Brilliant and hilarious, one hot combo ;))) xomo!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/20/2020 1:15:00 PM

The Bible reads, "Pride goeth before destruction", but that didn't rhyme! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 5/19/2020 1:14:00 PM

oh so clever lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/20/2020 1:14:00 PM

Mahalo, Jan! I worried that it might encourage people during the lockdown to hang a mirror at the foot of their stairs to get rid of other occupants? Aloha! Rico