Feng Shui

A mirror hanging on a wall
May be bewitching to us all
At the foot of the stairs
Best arrange your affairs
As Pride goeth before a fall!
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Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:56 PM
Good one. I got a little laugh. I appreciate you stopping by my page and taking time to comment. Sara
Leffanta Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Mahalo, Sara! Aloha! Rico
Faulkner Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 9:33 PM
And who is most fair? The one who makes it down the stairs (in glass slippers)!
Leffanta Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Aye, I suspect most people would like at the mirror instead of the stairs. Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 3:14 PM
Ah! Brilliant and hilarious, one hot combo ;))) xomo!
Leffanta Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:15 PM
The Bible reads, "Pride goeth before destruction", but that didn't rhyme! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:14 PM
oh so clever lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Mahalo, Jan! I worried that it might encourage people during the lockdown to hang a mirror at the foot of their stairs to get rid of other occupants? Aloha! Rico
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