Feminine Beauty

dress
                                           chartreuse
                                          sways freely
                                        peek a boo slits
                                     twirling, flowing, silk
                                           captivating
                                            romantic
                                              lovely 
                                              dance











Written on 10/9/2015
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 14, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your "Ninette Win." Love SKAT
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October 15, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Thank you, Skat, for your thoughtfulness to give congrats and read my poetry. I truly appreciate it :)
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October 14, 2015 at 9:24 AM
feminine Beauty has no bigger fan....than the heart of this here man....as I am a fan of these words....captivated by the romantic lovely dance so please don't disturb....;)
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Your lovely words do rhyme, Eric! Thank you for your kind comments and enjoying my little poem here :)
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October 14, 2015 at 7:45 AM
I used to be a fan of this dress when it was the fashion. This is a lovely sensual piece.
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, Richard, for enjoying my little poem! i think it is still in fashion, at least in some circles, lol :)
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October 14, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Wonderful take Laura n a superb win! Big congrats!
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October 15, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma, for stopping by with your kind congrats :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 10:08 PM
very pretty and sensual dress!! Congrats , I see you got a win on this one.
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October 15, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for reading and noticing my little poem here! I appreciate it :)
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October 13, 2015 at 8:38 AM
You painted a beautiful dancer with your Ninette, Laura! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Thank you again, Sandra, for your kind encouragement and words for my poetry. What a sweetheart you are :)
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October 13, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Somehow I wish I could have been there to see that lady! Great write for your win, Laura. Congrats.
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October 13, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Thank you, Dan, for stopping by with your kind words and congrats for me, I really appreciate it :)
Inman Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Lovely write, Laura.
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October 13, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Thank you, James. I appreciate you stopping by to see my poem :)
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Laura, in so little words you described it very well. Great job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
Leiser Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Thank you for your kind words and glad you enjoyed it, Alexis :)
Gorelick Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 9:51 PM
Oh, I like this one...Good luck...BG
Leiser Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Barbara. I really appreciate it :)
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:18 AM
what lovely imagery in so few words - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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October 11, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your many repeated encouraging comments! I do appreciate them so much :)
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