Nette Onclaud Poet Sonnet

Female Bonding

Our giggles lilt, whirling on paths divine
Inventing new summer tricks, how bubbly
That every joy ride is a drink so fine
From which we both sip, late nights of coffee.

Secrets we keep under river's deep floor
Like mirrored glass where we color the dew,
An only sis, eldest bloom I adore
When pained tears cascade; she’s my first rescue.

Though disputes flare, ardor bestows rebirth
With shared compass guiding a walk called life;
Exploring beyond dreams, fonder this earth,
As she cradles my hope, now a blest wife.

       The music still dances within our eyes
       One treasure of love bonding as allies.



When Older Siblings or Younger Step In...
Eve Roper’s Contest
1/2/2015

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Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 9:57 PM Nette, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis January 25, 2016 at 11:17 AM Of course a winner. I admire such relationship; all images of joy.

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 8:29 AM Hi Nette, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **

Sandra Haight January 15, 2016 at 6:30 PM Such a wonderful, loving tribute to your dear sis, Nette. Beautiful Sonnet! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars January 15, 2016 at 5:22 PM Nette, perfect for the contest, congrats it was wonderful...*smiles*-luloo

Jan Allison January 15, 2016 at 5:17 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry January 15, 2016 at 5:14 PM Congratulations on win in the contest with this wonderful poem.

Eve Roper January 15, 2016 at 4:26 PM Nette, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your sister a bond that cannot be broken. Hugs Eve

CayCay Godwin January 4, 2016 at 9:26 AM Mine was written from older sis perspective so I enjoyed the 'lil sis perspective. It is a lovely, touching sonnet ... CayCay

Kp Nunez January 3, 2016 at 5:29 PM An enchanting write that makes one yearn for those days. Mine died at an early age, but I can relate to your words, Nette. Loved the "bubbly" reference. huggs!

Paul Callus January 3, 2016 at 1:04 PM Nothing is finer than bonding between brothers and sisters. You describe yours with lovely poetic words, Nette! True sisterly love IS a treasure. ~ Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2016 at 12:03 PM - Beautiful diamond, Nette :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyva Marty January 2, 2016 at 9:09 AM Touched by the warmth of your poetry!

Constance La France January 2, 2016 at 8:14 AM Nette, your Sonnet is beautifully penned with so much depth and emotion, I love it 7, best of luck in the contest ~

Manny Paras January 1, 2016 at 7:30 PM My older sister nags but in the long run, she's still high on the list.You always come from the cervices of your heart; always a sigh to read you, queen of TPS!

Frederic Parker January 1, 2016 at 6:51 PM Well written my poetic friend, my first thought went to my wife who has three sisters..no greater bond have I ever seen..yours seems just as tightly held..a great blessing my friend..good luck in the contest

Jan Allison January 1, 2016 at 6:00 PM You have an amazing bond Nette you are so so lucky:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2016 at 5:37 PM You are the best, Nette.... Reminds me of my youngest sister Angie. Happy New Day. Linda