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Female Bonding

Our giggles lilt, whirling on paths divine Inventing new summer tricks, how bubbly That every joy ride is a drink so fine From which we both sip, late nights of coffee. Secrets we keep under river's deep floor Like mirrored glass where we color the dew, An only sis, eldest bloom I adore When pained tears cascade; she’s my first rescue. Though disputes flare, ardor bestows rebirth With shared compass guiding a walk called life; Exploring beyond dreams, fonder this earth, As she cradles my hope, now a blest wife. The music still dances within our eyes One treasure of love bonding as allies. When Older Siblings or Younger Step In... Eve Roper’s Contest 1/2/2015

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:57:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:17:00 AM
Of course a winner. I admire such relationship; all images of joy.
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Date: 1/18/2016 8:29:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:30:00 PM
Such a wonderful, loving tribute to your dear sis, Nette. Beautiful Sonnet! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:22:00 PM
Nette, perfect for the contest, congrats it was wonderful...*smiles*-luloo
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:17:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on win in the contest with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 1/15/2016 4:26:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your sister a bond that cannot be broken. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/4/2016 9:26:00 AM
Mine was written from older sis perspective so I enjoyed the 'lil sis perspective. It is a lovely, touching sonnet ... CayCay
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Date: 1/3/2016 5:29:00 PM
An enchanting write that makes one yearn for those days. Mine died at an early age, but I can relate to your words, Nette. Loved the "bubbly" reference. huggs!
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:04:00 PM
Nothing is finer than bonding between brothers and sisters. You describe yours with lovely poetic words, Nette! True sisterly love IS a treasure. ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:03:00 PM
- Beautiful diamond, Nette :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2016 9:09:00 AM
Touched by the warmth of your poetry!
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:14:00 AM
Nette, your Sonnet is beautifully penned with so much depth and emotion, I love it 7, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 1/1/2016 7:30:00 PM
My older sister nags but in the long run, she's still high on the list.You always come from the cervices of your heart; always a sigh to read you, queen of TPS!
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Date: 1/1/2016 6:51:00 PM
Well written my poetic friend, my first thought went to my wife who has three sisters..no greater bond have I ever seen..yours seems just as tightly held..a great blessing my friend..good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/1/2016 6:00:00 PM
You have an amazing bond Nette you are so so lucky:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2016 5:37:00 PM
You are the best, Nette.... Reminds me of my youngest sister Angie. Happy New Day. Linda
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