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Fell Twenty Floors

Gotta tell ya bout this fellow named Anthony Was relaxing on his twentieth floor balcony A scantily clad sweetie Cross the way said, “want a freebie?” Poor Anthony fell twenty floors to his finality © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 10/18/2015 5:22:00 PM
Oh my goodness!!!! Not much of a sweetie is she? Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/18/2015 8:59:00 PM
See what kind of trouble us guys can get into chasing a skirt!!! LOL xxxxx
Date: 9/20/2015 11:00:00 AM
Naw! Grandpa Troll was there to catch him... as Dragon helped on a hero's whim... But found her to be prim... For she had been talking about a hymn... He became a Bible thumping young man...
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Date: 9/21/2015 9:14:00 AM
Three cheers for Gramps!!! YEEHAW! xxx
Date: 9/18/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thought her balcony wasn't that far....he in love, reached out for his shooting star...his balance was shakie... Oh no, didn't makie ....fell to his death on my brand new car...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/21/2015 9:12:00 AM
Your limmies leave me speechless!!! AMAZING!
Date: 9/18/2015 10:20:00 AM
I envy Anthony Jack. LOL He died happy, very happy! lol
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Date: 9/18/2015 10:40:00 AM
Absolutely, he died for love (physical love I should differentiate!!!) LOL
Date: 9/18/2015 8:18:00 AM
this sounds like he may have also been drunk!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2015 8:21:00 AM
Drunk with passion!!! xxx

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