Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Fell Twenty Floors

Gotta tell ya bout this fellow named Anthony
Was relaxing on his twentieth floor balcony
A scantily clad sweetie
Cross the way said, “want a freebie?”
Poor Anthony fell twenty floors to his finality


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal October 18, 2015 at 5:22 PM Oh my goodness!!!! Not much of a sweetie is she? Always, Laura Jack Ellison October 18, 2015 at 8:59 PM See what kind of trouble us guys can get into chasing a skirt!!! LOL xxxxx

Carol Eastman September 20, 2015 at 11:00 AM Naw! Grandpa Troll was there to catch him... as Dragon helped on a hero's whim... But found her to be prim... For she had been talking about a hymn... He became a Bible thumping young man... Jack Ellison September 21, 2015 at 9:14 AM Three cheers for Gramps!!! YEEHAW! xxx

Tim Smith September 18, 2015 at 5:25 PM Thought her balcony wasn't that far....he in love, reached out for his shooting star...his balance was shakie... Oh no, didn't makie ....fell to his death on my brand new car... Jack Ellison September 21, 2015 at 9:12 AM Your limmies leave me speechless!!! AMAZING!

Michael Tor September 18, 2015 at 10:20 AM I envy Anthony Jack. LOL He died happy, very happy! lol Jack Ellison September 18, 2015 at 10:40 AM Absolutely, he died for love (physical love I should differentiate!!!) LOL

Judy Konos September 18, 2015 at 8:18 AM this sounds like he may have also been drunk! Jack Ellison September 18, 2015 at 8:21 AM Drunk with passion!!! xxx