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Fell Twenty Floors

Gotta tell ya bout this fellow named Anthony
Was relaxing on his twentieth floor balcony
A scantily clad sweetie
Cross the way said, “want a freebie?”
Poor Anthony fell twenty floors to his finality


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal Date: 10/18/2015 5:22:00 PM Oh my goodness!!!! Not much of a sweetie is she? Always, Laura Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 10/18/2015 8:59:00 PM See what kind of trouble us guys can get into chasing a skirt!!! LOL xxxxx

Carol Eastman Date: 9/20/2015 11:00:00 AM Naw! Grandpa Troll was there to catch him... as Dragon helped on a hero's whim... But found her to be prim... For she had been talking about a hymn... He became a Bible thumping young man... Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 9/21/2015 9:14:00 AM Three cheers for Gramps!!! YEEHAW! xxx

Tim Smith Date: 9/18/2015 5:25:00 PM Thought her balcony wasn't that far....he in love, reached out for his shooting star...his balance was shakie... Oh no, didn't makie ....fell to his death on my brand new car... Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 9/21/2015 9:12:00 AM Your limmies leave me speechless!!! AMAZING!

Michael Tor Date: 9/18/2015 10:20:00 AM I envy Anthony Jack. LOL He died happy, very happy! lol Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 9/18/2015 10:40:00 AM Absolutely, he died for love (physical love I should differentiate!!!) LOL

Judy Konos Date: 9/18/2015 8:18:00 AM this sounds like he may have also been drunk! Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 9/18/2015 8:21:00 AM Drunk with passion!!! xxx