Feline Hierarchy

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Written, January 23, 2025
For The Contest, “4x4x4x4”
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley

Felisha Cat

Charlie was a gentleman yielding to her wants; always first to eat jumped ahead in line. Felisha was her name; first, before he joined. Ranking ruled her mind- so he must obey. Letting her steal treats and his favorite lap; passing him in halls while bopping his head. She died at thirteen. He lived until twenty- missing her so dearly. Charlie was a gentleman.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2025 7:18:00 AM

So funny! Love the pic too. We do their bidding, then they leave us in tears.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/23/2025 11:49:00 AM

aww Charlie sounds adorable, what a sweet poem Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/23/2025 11:40:00 AM

Hello Sandre, I enjoyed this poem. it will be my fav. that black cat is beautiful. Hugs. /Darlene/