Feline Frolics

Irene, dear cat Ate a fat rat Supping on this dish Now eyes my goldfish February 10, 2020 4pm PST

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/11/2020 1:21:00 PM

Irene possesses a huge appetite, Pania!! Even when well fed, cats instinctively go after most moving things; it's in their nature. Enjoyed your cute poem. Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/11/2020 3:29:00 PM

Greeings, Paul! I see you understand the nature of cats.-)) it was simply a fun poem . The Clerihew is perfect for a turtle slow typist like me. Gratefully, Pania xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/11/2020 5:43:00 AM

Was this RATatouille Irene was eating? Your words made me smile Panagiota, she sounds like a real character, just like you my Piscean Panagiota, hahaha With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/11/2020 9:06:00 AM

Ann, you! Blessed with heart and humor! Oh my. LOL RATatouille! LOL. Of the two of us,i.e., cat and I, I cannot tell who is sillier. I do wish she'd write poetry. I fear she knows I am a Pisces! Could it be? She loves to bite my toes and arms.. Gratefully, Panagiota xx

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/11/2020 12:29:00 AM

A simple message in your poem. Train the cat to love the goldfish! Easier said than done! A conflict of hunger and moral wish! Keep writing!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/11/2020 8:58:00 AM

Krish- the sign of a true poet is yours. It's called "acknowledging" another poet. Besides,that some excellent, quite unique poetry you have penned. Judgementalism is for critics. You write from the heart. Trying out new forms is not easy for me. So I appreciate your humorous commment immensely. Panagiota xx