Feline Frolics





       Irene, dear cat
       Ate a fat rat
       Supping on this dish
       Now eyes my goldfish


       February 10, 2020
       4pm PST


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Callus Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Irene possesses a huge appetite, Pania!! Even when well fed, cats instinctively go after most moving things; it's in their nature. Enjoyed your cute poem. Regards // paul
Romios Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Greeings, Paul! I see you understand the nature of cats.-)) it was simply a fun poem . The Clerihew is perfect for a turtle slow typist like me. Gratefully, Pania xx
Gilmour Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Was this RATatouille Irene was eating? Your words made me smile Panagiota, she sounds like a real character, just like you my Piscean Panagiota, hahaha With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Romios Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Ann, you! Blessed with heart and humor! Oh my. LOL RATatouille! LOL. Of the two of us,i.e., cat and I, I cannot tell who is sillier. I do wish she'd write poetry. I fear she knows I am a Pisces! Could it be? She loves to bite my toes and arms.. Gratefully, Panagiota xx
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 12:29 AM
A simple message in your poem. Train the cat to love the goldfish! Easier said than done! A conflict of hunger and moral wish! Keep writing!
Romios Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Krish- the sign of a true poet is yours. It's called "acknowledging" another poet. Besides,that some excellent, quite unique poetry you have penned. Judgementalism is for critics. You write from the heart. Trying out new forms is not easy for me. So I appreciate your humorous commment immensely. Panagiota xx
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