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Feet off the ground

Your arms around my neck My arms around your waist Holding pattern...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 12/31/2008 2:38:00 AM
cute- yummy haiku--Nigel -thank you!!
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:00:00 PM
The last line makes this one! Enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 11/28/2008 12:39:00 PM
Awww. however this came to be, it is love. love, Kristin
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Date: 11/28/2008 8:48:00 AM
SWEET! What a lovely little poem, Nigel! ...Makes me smile! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/27/2008 8:31:00 AM
What a beautiful picture this paints, Nigel. Perfect moment... suspended. To use your own words..."Brilliant". Love Robin
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Date: 11/27/2008 8:23:00 AM
NIgel, I feel completely incompetent after reading your work. This is just terrific. I think this may be the first time I've teared up over a haiku..:). BG
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