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Feet Off the Ground

Your arms around my neck My arms around your waist Holding pattern...

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Mc Mc

Date: 12/31/2008 2:38:00 AM

cute- yummy haiku--Nigel -thank you!!

Date: 11/28/2008 3:00:00 PM

The last line makes this one! Enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/28/2008 12:39:00 PM

Awww. however this came to be, it is love. love, Kristin

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/28/2008 8:48:00 AM

SWEET! What a lovely little poem, Nigel! ...Makes me smile! ~ Love, Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/27/2008 8:31:00 AM

What a beautiful picture this paints, Nigel. Perfect moment... suspended. To use your own words..."Brilliant". Love Robin

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/27/2008 8:23:00 AM

NIgel, I feel completely incompetent after reading your work. This is just terrific. I think this may be the first time I've teared up over a haiku..:). BG