Feet Off the Ground

Your arms around my neck
My arms around your waist
Holding pattern...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 31, 2008 at 2:38 AM
cute- yummy haiku--Nigel -thank you!!
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November 28, 2008 at 3:00 PM
The last line makes this one! Enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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November 28, 2008 at 12:39 PM
Awww. however this came to be, it is love. love, Kristin
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November 28, 2008 at 8:48 AM
SWEET! What a lovely little poem, Nigel! ...Makes me smile! ~ Love, Carrie
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November 27, 2008 at 8:31 AM
What a beautiful picture this paints, Nigel. Perfect moment... suspended. To use your own words..."Brilliant". Love Robin
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November 27, 2008 at 8:23 AM
NIgel, I feel completely incompetent after reading your work. This is just terrific. I think this may be the first time I've teared up over a haiku..:). BG
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