Feelings of Love

In the clear water of a summer stream
Your face shone out bright and clear
I wrote in the leaves and flowers
About you who is like the soft sunlight
Like a cloud in my horizon
Like a rythm in my soul
You stood like the bright flame of the mud lamp which burns in my heart

Come swimming through the gentle breeze like a cloud and sprinkle your shower on me always
You are my favourite dream who is like the peacock when it spreads out it feathers during the rain
Memories are standing on my way like the trees on the wayside
Girl who wears anklets and who is as beautiful as the moon
I am the avenue trees which decorate your foot path

Waves stretch out to the green banks
For many births my heart has been searching for
In a heaven which is covered by sun rays
In a cage which is wrapped with leaves
I am being awakened from my meditation because of a butterfly(you)
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Mohanty Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 4:26 AM
Nice poem BABU,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Please read my poems and comment...........
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 2:43 AM
- Excellent poem Yadhu.... Beautiful written, thanks for sharing.... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:08 AM
SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
Mohammed Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 7:15 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Yadhu . Your poem is lovely, I enjoyed perusing it. Thanks for your kind review on mine.
Kearley Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Yes! That sounds like love... Very nice write. Thanks for stopping by my page. I'll be looking forward to more great writings from you.
Ellison Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 5:45 AM
An excellent start to life in the Soup! Well done!
Babu Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 10:02 PM
THANK YOU FOR YOUR VALUABLE REVIEW.....:)
Michaels Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 2:31 AM
kept up the good work
Babu Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 3:49 AM
thank you chris, obviously i'll
Manassian Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 12:27 AM
Romantically sweet! :) Thanks for your visits to my work.
Babu Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 10:16 PM
:)
Sivey Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 5:46 AM
This is a very influential write Yadhu, quite the special write! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Excellent piece written here my friend!!! This is love expressed here.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:15 AM
- A very lovely poem, Yadhu ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Danie Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:08 AM
Nice poem YADHU... :) A~D
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