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Feelings My Feelings

26th &27th January 2012 By Sashi Prabhu (zeauoxian)
Alone I sat on the wet sands, Of the Sernabatim beach lands. The sun reflected blue sky, On the greenish grey waters it looked so dry. A sweltering sunny afternoon, With the heat I began to swoon. Alone, I moved myself into the waters warm, The breaking waves look to me like many a lifeless form. Warm waters I sense splash unto my waist, Cool salty breeze sting my moist lips and chest, sweat erased. The frothy waters seem so white, Feral imagination within me is beginning to run regressive and makes me feel all right. Alone I am rooted on the sandy shore, I have within me, coming to the fore, Feelings… deep feelings inside ignite, Need to hold on to them tight, The feelings incite, A poem in my mind’s eye I feel and now see, that I would have to write, Without any spite. Alone, I am in the waters warm, The breaking waters lash against me and quickly change form, To myself feelings that turn to spirity words I begin to recite, As I cast my eyes on nature around me from within springs delight, And in its own right, The poem begins to rewrite. Alone, I am in the waters warm, My feelings have begun to rewrite, In my mind without any spite, I am now filling myself with delight, As expression is flowing freely in its own right, And will transcend on to paper in black and white. Alone, I now sit, drenched, To the sands entrenched. Melts the noon, And evening falls attune, The sun reflected blue sky, Has now swooned away and I turn a blind eye. Alone, I now sit, drenched, Content in myself and with no feelings wrenched. Gratified….soothened…satisfied…pleased, Relaxed…happy….at ease and contented……eased.

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Date: 3/8/2012 3:56:00 PM
Good good on YOu self soothing! intense intimate write!! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2012 8:30:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win in PD's contest, Sashi! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sashi
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:10:00 PM
Congrats on another win with this great write. I love the refrain...very creative. Blessings, Rhonda
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/6/2012 7:55:00 AM
thanks RHONDA ..........~sashi
Date: 3/5/2012 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/6/2012 7:59:00 AM
thanks for the wishes Carol.........~sashi
Date: 3/5/2012 9:51:00 AM
congrats Sashi on being number one again luv.. for quality write ..
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:16:00 AM
Congrats, sashi. Well deserved. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/4/2012 6:47:00 PM
sashi... .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/5/2012 12:46:00 AM
thank you very much......~sashi
Date: 2/12/2012 2:45:00 AM
CONGRATS ONCE AGAIN... A XOOL ENTRY..PD
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/20/2012 9:35:00 PM
thsnk you
Date: 2/10/2012 10:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/10/2012 10:58:00 AM
thank you Carol
Date: 2/8/2012 3:53:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win, superb rhyming throughout, I can see a lot of work and thought went into this one...
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/10/2012 10:59:00 AM
thank you very much Charlotte for the warm words of encouragement...
Date: 2/8/2012 9:15:00 AM
congrats Sashi on a marvelous first place win for this gem of a write luv..
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/8/2012 9:51:00 AM
thanks for the wishes Linda.
Date: 2/8/2012 5:20:00 AM
First place for sure!! Gotta try and live out this tactile poem on my next trip to the ocean. I too now feel eased! Congrats on this first place win. Gwendolen
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/8/2012 8:53:00 AM
thank you very much for the wishes Gwendolen.
Date: 2/8/2012 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations Sashi love it x
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/8/2012 8:53:00 AM
thanks a million Mandy
Date: 2/8/2012 12:03:00 AM
An excellent description of the creative process. Well done.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/8/2012 8:54:00 AM
thank you very much Chuck
Date: 2/7/2012 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved first place win Sashi
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/8/2012 9:58:00 AM
thanks for the wishes Bob
Date: 2/7/2012 9:53:00 PM
Hey big congrats for your 1st place win in my contest Sashi xx
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/8/2012 8:55:00 AM
thank you very much Tracie.

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