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Poetry/Blitz/Feelings and Words
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1617-689-20
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, January 20, 2024
For the Interntional Contest, Blitz of Words
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 02/17/2024

Third Place

'' To be a writer remote, alone, is to enter a portal into another realm."

                      Quote by  _Constance

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writing is life writing is feelings feelings that need release feelings that need telling telling feelings in stories telling in syllables syllables falling on paper syllables bleeding with grief grief so deep grief that leaves scars scars on the soul scars on my journey journey of ups and downs journey through life's mazes mazes full of unkindness mazes down unknown forest paths paths that lead no where paths that lead to beauty beauty that makes me linger beauty that is inspiring inspiring me to stay inspiring me to pen poems poems of meandering streams poems of twittering birds birds singing me a symphony birds delightful and beautiful beautiful wildflowers beautiful poetry poetry mingled with life and nature poetry from the depth of my heart heart broken heart that is still healing healing from grief healing from bullies bullies from my childhood bullies that still find me me, a gentle girl me, a quiet girl girl who only wants tranquility girl who only wants serenity serenity to share serenity that is deep deep and hard to write deep stories written written full of pain written words words falling red words bleeding bleeding . . . red . . .

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Date: 2/19/2024 9:38:00 AM
Great winner in Silent One's contest. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2024 11:19:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/17/2024 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2024 4:22:00 PM
Silent, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/20/2024 5:20:00 PM
I agree with your initial quote. The words and lines in your Blitz have captured how I feel about writing. I can identify with these words: syllables bleeding with grief grief so deep grief that leaves scars scars on the soul. A masterpiece, Constance. Admire your poetic voice and style, Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2024 10:01:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the comment and compliment on my poem and my writing, Constance
Date: 1/20/2024 5:17:00 PM
Dear Constance, this is a poignant journey through the labyrinth of emotions, beautifully expressed in the cadence of your verses. Your words resonate with the depth of life's experiences, from grief and scars to the healing power of beauty and poetry. How you explain the intricacies of your journey, blending pain and inspiration, paints such resilience and artistic expression. Your poem is a testament to the connection between life, nature, and the written word. I Loved it! Blessings, Daniel
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2024 10:03:00 AM
Daniel, thank you for the wonderful comment, it touched me deeply, and for the compliment, blessings, Constance

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