Feelings

(Few lines) At this moment as I speak of thee Slowly a caged bird is blithely set free A buried one gets a glimpse of eternity Its in you, and just you that I find me For there seems a language you so nicely speak Well, though its not mandarin nor is it greek The language of love it is which so far unknown to me And, your love binds me the only way it sets me free Every moment with you arouses trust and rage in one breath I learn life not just as a beauty but a battle till death You are a sight to behold which makes yet the heavens sigh I love you enough to let you go says my moist eye.......

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Sarban Bhattacharya

Date: 9/12/2016 12:39:00 AM

This poem ends with a mournful note and encompasses the philosophy of love and lovelessness. Nice, Priyanka.

Priyanka Chattopadhyay
Date: 9/12/2016 8:49:00 AM

Thank you for your inspiring comment Sarban. I value it very much. Thanks again

Skat A

Date: 8/9/2016 12:33:00 AM

Priyanka, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 10:24:00 AM

Priyanka Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Priyanka Chattopadhyay
Date: 8/6/2016 11:38:00 PM

Linda I feel great joy and gratitude towards you. I do want you and everyone else here to give criticisms on my poems as and when required. It will always be amazing if the ones like you comment on my poems :) Also, I need to mention that your poems are beautifully written. Thanks so much