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Feelings

On better days, On better nights before wide blue yonder turned into a black widow spider Have we met , Have we painted a blank canvas Have We shared the same pallette Have We danced to the tango vals of words through soft tangerine haze that hoovered gently , slowly Outside my windowpane. I could swear you were here. Like an unsettled moon I blushed at your sight Stars glistened just because I watched you smile. Pastel Fresia washed my empty sheets with fragrance Sweet and mild I nestled in your arms like an embarrassed child. But ... But then I turned my face away I closed my eyes to sleep I drifted with the wind that billowed far from dreams. Reality hit hard . A stranger was and still to be Naked of identity, sinking in your silence Suspense and mystery. Struggling in a prison too scared to be set free. Too weak to show emotion too strong to heal and feel. On better days, On better nights before wide blue yonder turned into a black widow spider Have We met , Have We provoked the spaces Have We walked hand in hand Did We create moments so hard to forget Or do We live the memory that whispers No regrets ! ! !
Inspired by an oldie song 'Feelings '

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/6/2016 8:55:00 AM
It seems I am drawn back to a dream. This is lovely.
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Date: 6/28/2016 11:15:00 PM
This one has a dream like quality to it. Well expressed!
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:57:00 AM
Splendid with vivid pictures complementing a wonderful block of soul longing lines. A perfect 7 for a wonderful week.
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Date: 4/6/2016 7:32:00 AM
Amazing writes. I enjoy from top to bottom.Keep it up.......
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Date: 4/2/2016 3:31:00 PM
Some moments are so hard to forget and quick to erupt at anything that reminds you the moment. ..lovely poem dear..
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Date: 4/1/2016 5:57:00 PM
Whoa..lovely piece
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Date: 4/1/2016 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Charmaine!! I am still playing catching up...so many emails to reply too! This poem is beautiful and romantic, and you have inserted so many awesome images and phrases! The song 'feelings' is one of my favs...and so is this poem! ~ Warm regards ~ paul
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Date: 3/31/2016 11:44:00 PM
I could feel every line, this made me think of other songs as well, as well as some old poetry, loved this!
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Date: 3/31/2016 5:37:00 PM
Charmaine, this is so BEAUTIFUL and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 3/31/2016 9:55:00 AM
Very good! Nicely done!
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:36:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Charmaine :) ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2016 10:55:00 AM
Hi Charmaine: I love the way you queried your emotions on someone that might have been. Great POTD!
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Date: 3/30/2016 9:53:00 AM
Love the poem, Charmaine, congratulations on Poem of the day!!
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Date: 3/30/2016 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations Charmaine, Well deserved POTD.
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Date: 3/30/2016 8:52:00 AM
Charmaine ....hearty Congratulations on Poem of the Day...most deserved....
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Date: 3/30/2016 8:08:00 AM
Charmaine, congratulations on POTD. Music is a huge part of my life and is a never ending source of inspiration. This is a lovely poem. Very well written. Peace young lady:)
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:25:00 AM
I love to listen to music when I write it's a great source of inspiration:-) Very beautifully penned Charma congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/30/2016 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations Charma on POTD. Your poetry is always a breath of fresh air. Enjoy your day. Hugs Tim
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:59:00 AM
I like the consistency in terms of metaphoric lines. Overall, a great piece. ;)
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:13:00 AM
Excellent and beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:50:00 PM
Loved it! Well written. Thank you for sharing! Xx
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Date: 3/29/2016 4:52:00 PM
Charma, excellent...David
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Date: 3/29/2016 4:33:00 AM
very engaging, love the repetitions, and some clever lines that underpin the vibrancy of the write, ...well done
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Date: 3/28/2016 4:56:00 PM
I remember singing that song in my crackling voice bothering my sister growing up. You have painted a tender moment of an excited courtship but never really knowing the person...love the ending Charma.
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