Feelings

Emptiness... Loneliness... Sadness... Bitterness... Heartless.... What are these? What does it means? Is it even meanings? Words- or maybe thoughts.... Just bunch of letters grabbed together... No.. They are feelings... Feelings that touch the heart and the soul... Feelings that burns the heart from deep inside... Feelings that kills you slowly... They are very cold and cruel... It wounds you..Cause you endless scares, timeless and unstoppable... It can never be healed... Those are the worst feelings .. That's why i wish to never feel...

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White Sage

Date: 2/16/2016 2:12:00 PM

heartfelt write Dalia, well expressed, powerful lines i see...

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/21/2016 8:41:00 AM

Thank you very much for your delightful comment, hugs / / :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2015 7:22:00 AM

- A deep moving poem, Dalia - Enjoy reading your poem today - Now that the time is near I want to wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/14/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thanks alot my dear Anne 4 ur sweet sweet comment I'm glad u enjoyed it..I'm honored that u stopped by to read my poem...I wish u a beautiful happy Merry Christmas....lot of love and hugs.... Dalia :D

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/12/2015 2:23:00 AM

I understand this pain. Sometimes I wish I do not feel as much as I do...other times, I know they complete me...its what makes us humans. Love your poetry, very raw, and very touching. Always, Laura

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/12/2015 5:24:00 PM

Thank u so much dear laura for ur sweet true words...I agree with u feelings what makes us humans....and some times even the pain seems to be sweet , has its own sting that makes us feel the pleasure of sweet hurting pain....Anyways I'm honored by ur visit and I really do appreciate it... Hugs :D .... Dalia

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/7/2015 9:35:00 AM

it saddens my heart that you feel....that broken emotions cant be healed....because it is just a simple task to do....open your heart and Let God's Love Shine Through....and then you will see....that if you want to be truly free....of all pain that tends to come along....Only His Love Can Keep us safe and strong....nice write dalia....I know many who feel the same and it causes me pain to see it....

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/7/2015 5:47:00 PM

Thank u very much mu dear for ur sweet words i'm really glad u liked it but though this poem is fictional but still so glad for ur lovely comment... Hugs :-D

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/6/2015 6:39:00 PM

I know of a feeling that does not injure but gives the purest warmth and life to me, your love, my Violet Poetess...Justin

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/6/2015 7:21:00 PM

I can't thank you enough for ur sweet sweet words...I really do appreciate it...hugs :D

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 11:49:00 AM

It means we are all human Dalia, or at least some kind of breathing living creation. A wonderful and deep write. How about writing one with good feelings, the opposite of this poem. I'd like to read ... This is a sad write, thank you for sharing about feelings. SKAT

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/6/2015 12:11:00 PM

The pleasure is all mine, I would love to dear SKAT...and I'm truly honored by ur sweet words , I appreciate it....thank you very much. Hugs :D