Feelings

to feel beyond 
the eyes 
they cannot see 
where there is love 
there is life 

churning at the bottom 
in a deep ocean 
swelling out 
dripping on paper 
blowing upon 
the breath 
a kiss 

breathing frost cold 
ice turning black 
within silence 
in dense dullness 
freezing to the insides 
a cold 
lonely heart 

slowly becoming warm 
dripping in love's beauty 
morning dew 
of spring 
bringing life 
to a beautiful feeling 

happiness blossoms 
mingling in air 
one of delight 
petals of emotion 
i stand 
in the harsh 
winter before spring 

forgiving the past 
in a beautiful circle 
this world 
becomes beautiful 
once again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 6:41 PM
I know exactly what you mean in this poem. The world seems like a cold and dark place when we are alone, then we find a friend who brings warmth and color into our lives, changing our outlook completely! A very heartfelt and inspiring poem, Liam! Wonderful poetry, I loved it!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 2:58 PM
KELLY THANK YOU FOR THE DELIGHTFUL BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED MY FRIEND
Mbamalu Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Good one...its soooooo it!..learnt more of free verse from you....thanks
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 2:56 PM
THANK YOU DEARLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
Carroll Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Hey Liam, A wonderful write from you buddy...I liked this one. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 2:34 PM
thank you my dear friend for the lovely comment deeply appreciated
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