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Feeling Pain

The pain I feel A bad storm, Reeking havoc on my life Taking control I cover myself Trying to find shelter There’s no way out Facing the storm I fight through With less pain The storm calms I finally see the sun

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2009 7:21:00 PM

You certainly inherited your mother's talent for writing powerful, uplifting poems, Shannon! Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2009 8:39:00 AM

Shannon you must keep on writing and sharing with us. I have truly enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this morning. Love and blessing, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/16/2009 4:13:00 PM

A very good write! Light & Love Welcome!

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/13/2009 9:27:00 PM

Straight to the point again.. loved it again... enjoy your night.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/13/2009 12:12:00 PM

Love the uplifting ending most of all, as we all go through life's storms it is always good to be reminded the sun does eventually reappear. Awesome poetry. Love, Shar

Date: 6/13/2009 11:16:00 AM

Dear Shannon, the emotion comes through your words in this poem. I like how your ended with a feeling of hope. I see others were impressed with this piece. Keep on writing! Love, Mom

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/13/2009 9:39:00 AM

Hmm, men often try to run away from the challenges of life, but we’ve all got to face it and at the end it will surely be over and… we will see the sun. this is a very wonderful, comforting piece… wishing you all the best with your writes,you've got a great talent how is you studies and your sis?… I hope both of you are doing well… you’ve got a lovely family.

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/13/2009 7:14:00 AM

wow... loved this one too, I try to comment without looking at others comments that way I wont be tempted to say the same things as everyone else. Powerful and straight to the point, looking forward to more. Enjoy your day.

Diane Christian

Date: 6/13/2009 5:45:00 AM

aww beautiful shannon you are as wonderful in words as your mum, a powerful piece , welcome to poetry soup God bless you from diane

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/12/2009 11:42:00 PM

I too face my cloudy skies, and am reassured when I see the sun pierce through, that it's only a temporary storm. So much more beauty after it passes, that when it's there, I have so much to think about while awaiting its' passing...Raul

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 6/12/2009 9:31:00 PM

Sounds like you could utter the miracle word from the War Within and you'd see the sun with less of a struggle.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/12/2009 7:35:00 PM

Well written, Shannon, each if us must find our way through our personal storms. Welcome to the Soup and best wishes! Carrie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/12/2009 7:08:00 PM

self discovery! cool write! Shannon! Jim

John Rhinem

Date: 6/12/2009 6:13:00 PM

Life is like that sometimes isn't it....But its the battles, that make us better, wiser and stronger! That fill us with empathies and sympathies! That keep us grounded and humble, and realizing our dependencies upon someone greater than ourselves!!? Again, wonderful searching write of reflections!!~"Love & Warmth To You & Yours, Always, John!!":):) Bye Again ~

James Fraser

Date: 6/12/2009 5:07:00 PM

Lovely write on the easing of pain Shannon>James