Feeling Good

Walking with that stride,
Saying I can do anything.
My stride following the rythm of my heart.
Smirking at the wet grass,
Making everything shimmer,
Oh so brightly.
Laughing with the thoughts in my head,
Joking with the sun that smiles down at me.
Getting what I want,
Everything being handed down,
The weather relaxing my hands.
My surroundings oh so addictive.
My mind loosing controll in it's thoughts,
Getting tangled,
With such an un-bareable scartch at my eyes.
A feeling I fall in love with,
The instant it sends shards of pain through out my arms.
The smile growing across my face,
Tilting my head back as I walk with such a stride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kearley Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 12:10 PM
I sent you a soupmail :-)
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October 30, 2011 at 7:37 PM
I love the way you tangle your words.I felt as if I was with you on that walk. Joking with the sun that smiles down at me... :-) Loved it!
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