Feeling Free

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Hemmed in within the boundaries of form, I looked in wonderment at boundless space and melding therein felt bliss stirrings warm, rising from heart as outpourings of grace. In time dissolved stillness, I stood thus still and without any doing on my part, soma nectar flowed; I drank to my fill, throbbing with rapture, adding love to cart. Space then God’s womb and body a bubble, I shifted attention to the vast void, feeling breath by breath ecstasy double, no longer thereafter by fears decoyed. Free and unbound, I’m now one with life’s flow, transformed as a bliss mist, always aglow. 26-December-2022 Feel Free Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/26/2022 12:00:00 PM

Your "Feeling free" write/picture is magical. Have a blessed day............

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/26/2022 7:48:00 PM

Thank you Paula ~ so happy you enjoyed. Have a great year ahead

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/26/2022 7:26:00 AM

Seeker! This poem, i believe what it speaks. It reads to me as if it were written while you were in the very mist of the midst of your soul’s elevating rise in God. And, spoken in a Knowing! Fondly, sally

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/26/2022 7:47:00 PM

Delighting in the blossoming, the becoming :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/26/2022 6:41:00 AM

Very beautiful! To empty of turbulent lesser self, is to give opportunity to be filled. Such bliss and awe when it is that of Pure Divine Light. Inspiring, uplifting read!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/26/2022 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Joe!