Feeling Alone In the Wild?

That love of nature
made me eagerly explore
everything that was truly beautiful;
and hiking in those dense woods,
its secret wasn't to be kept...
I had no name for the wild-flowers,
only for the hydras along a brook,
but the unicorn plants
didn't seem to belong there...
As I went deeper into it,
even my footsteps echoed
through an air of suspense;
and the vulnerable shrikes
fled from the voltures,
so did the accipiters
seeking out the help of the eagles,
undaunting eagles gone to the sunny skies...  

Adventure,in the truest sense of the word,
was a passion I couldn't renounce...
and it came to life through search and silence;
and who could be feeling alone in the wild,
when the harmonious sounds responded 
to a curious and intuitive mind?


Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 23, 2009 at 11:28 PM
Andrew, congrats on your feature...Raul
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May 23, 2009 at 4:04 PM
Congrats Andrew on your narrative being featured. Vince
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May 23, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, James
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May 22, 2009 at 2:26 PM
Andrew, I love to be alone in nature. My most precious moments in life took place in the woods. Now, I retire to the woods where memories of camping days with my children stay fresh in my mind. I really enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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May 21, 2009 at 7:34 AM
I love the passion with which you write, this piece is awesome. Great you .Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. love Leke
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May 21, 2009 at 6:43 AM
A Wordsworthian masterpiece ... congratulation on being featured this week
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May 19, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your terrific featured poem ! Laura :)
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May 18, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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May 18, 2009 at 3:30 AM
It's a great write. Congratulations and more success. Ernilando
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May 17, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Andrew Rgds Brian
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May 17, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Jordan Avatar
July 16, 2008 at 8:47 AM
Great poem - I was there taking each step with you as I read this wonderful poem - blessings to you and your family always
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