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Feeling

My love does not see my tears fall, nor does he see my smile grow His hands and heart alone seek my happiness and loneliness Sightless since birth, he views the world through his touch and emotions Dedicated to all those who are blind, yet still see the world in so many ways... For the Contest "A Short Poem, Please" Written by: Shani Fassbender

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John Freeman

Date: 9/3/2011 11:33:00 AM

This is beutifully heartfelt, Shani......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 9/3/2011 10:27:00 AM

Many congratulations, Shani : )

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/3/2011 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations !!!!!!!!------Lori

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 3:27:00 AM

An Honorable Mention Win Congratulations. CR

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/2/2011 1:18:00 AM

Beautiful poem, and from your photo, he is missing real beauty. Congratulations on your HM of this poem. Take care and well done. Lee

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2011 4:37:00 PM

A beautiful write Shani, congratulations on your placement with this gem :) love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2011 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Shani. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/1/2011 11:43:00 AM

hey Shani congrats on your Hm ..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 11:37:00 AM

Congrats Shani on your HM in this contest with profound poetry luv.. enjoy special honor with great dedication too..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2011 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on the win,Shani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:27:00 PM

This is very heartfelt and beautiful. Congratulations. Shani.

Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2011 8:00:00 AM

Beautiful, soji with a powerful message, Shani. thank you for sharing and many congrats on your BIG WIN., Lainie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 8:05:00 PM

emotive piece that make me cheer for your great glory win, shani... :) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 3:35:00 PM

Awesome poem, Shani. I had a friend who was blind since birth and you conveyed the way she lived her life so well. Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Sijo" contest. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 5/4/2011 1:54:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win, Shani : )

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:37:00 PM

Congrats my dear on your win!!

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/4/2011 12:34:00 PM

A lovely poem and a great win. xx

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/4/2011 12:27:00 PM

Congrats Shani on your win with this lovely Sijo.Loved how you penned the last line.just so beautiful..Love, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations Shani on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 10:16:00 AM

Shani , it's great to see you in the top three again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/4/2011 6:49:00 AM

Thanks Shani for supporting my contest. This piece is an emotional one, it caught my attention so much, it's so cute & creative. Congrats on your 3rd place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, which you all the best. Adeleke

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/4/2011 6:20:00 AM

this is wonderful..congrats on your big win.. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2011 4:41:00 AM

Congrats Shani on your excellent win in Sweet Sijo contest with this wonderful write and entry luv.. perfect title too.. enjoy ...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 4:30:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, shani

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 5:18:00 PM

Thoughful expressions on feeling, Shani