Feel the Rain

I can feel the rain drops, go drip drop drip,
I wish to let thy sound to only let thy 
Rain cripple into my ears and to clip,
 
The burning fierce fires away from thou mind,
I ask for no such thing as help I cry,
For letting the rain go but I do find,
 
That I feel un-safe I am scared, I nip,
At myself with a blade cause I want die,
I hear and feel the fierce fires rising up, 
 
As I carry out my last tear I fear,
I think of sweet silence that could be dear,
Dearly beloved I do want to cheer,
Cheer loud and clear that the war with myself,
Has been conquered by me, yes by me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 2:40 PM
sad topic..good outcome! Light & Love
Kapoor Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 1:01 AM
Good judgment to conquer your fear. Keep the hopes more dominant in your poems as pains and sufferings are here to make us stronger and it gives us chance to rise even if we face one or many falls. Best wishes and love Ravindra
Heslop Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 3:09 PM
a pain many us have known....just know that many others are here to listen...grrth
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 5:33 AM
Hope that only poem about a subject not you that this is happening to now. Nicely written. Sara
Knop Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Very nicely written, Amanda! We are all torn sometimes inside, I liked very much "Cheer loud..." and "Has been conquered..." And thanks for your comment!!! Gert
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