Laurentine G Poet Free verse

Feel Me In My Silence

          an echo within a void 
  carries on the air
              infinite

  feel me in my silence 
       always present 
  as are you
without a wall to ease rebound 
       grasping within aching eons
    aware of nevers 

       in the umbra
no words leave lips
       nor emotions describe

     all that can be
           lingers
               seeking glimmers
          ready for a reality
  where lines cross 
      and our energy meets
             we talk the same language 
      in the same space
               in the same time

   here, you can only feel me

          that is the longing

put into words 
as best I can

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Tania Kitchin May 20, 2026 at 3:49 AM LG, a beautifully penned poem, full of love and raw emotions. Congratulations on your first place win. Laurentine G May 20, 2026 at 7:53 AM Thank you Tania, I appreciate your kind reading of my poem :)

Ink Empress May 19, 2026 at 7:20 AM Must I go on ? I will fave this and place it first just so you know you are one of my very fave, amidst all the platforms im on! You stand out! You have a very unique poetic voice! Stay you! Congratulations on your first! Sending you light always Laurentine G May 19, 2026 at 11:09 AM Haha I can't hear you lol :D

Ink Empress May 19, 2026 at 7:19 AM Your words have soul in it, such sincerity that gets readers to feel so very deeply and be in touch the emotional layers flowing in such a poetic manner! I love this as I felt a hint of melancholy, and also longing, somehow it resonates with me too! I like poems like this! Doesn’t necessarily have to be long, it just have to leave us feeling, ( in my case) lol i am strong on feeling words! I especially loved “ we talk the same language in the same space in the same time” Laurentine G May 19, 2026 at 11:08 AM I try to create a space in the poem where time moves differently - it's hard to know if that tracks because I only know how they read to me. You probably read more poetry than anyone I know, so I appreciate your judgement and kind commentary. I always laugh when you say "readers" though haha - I rarely hit the plural lol

Paige Hind May 18, 2026 at 11:21 PM deep writing, love the ending wow Laurentine G May 19, 2026 at 11:04 AM Thank you Paige for your sweet comments, so glad you enjoyed :)