- Feel Free -

If you could fly....
Fly like a eagle or
a butterfly.
Feel free and fly into
the sky over the mountain
and over the sea.
Such a lovely scene.
You will feel like a queen.
Fly like a eagle or a butterfly.
Try it, use your fantasy.....








A-L  Andresen :)
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Jones Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:00 AM
You imagery is wonderful Anne. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Jones Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:54 AM
:O) You are most welcome Anne Lise. *S* Cynthia
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January 10, 2015 at 7:36 AM
- Cynthia, thank you for visit and comments my 2nd poem from 2011 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kos Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Marvelous 2nd poem indeed. best wishes -- ivo
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 4:11 AM
- Ivo, thank you for visit and comments my 2nd poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Duncan Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 1:44 PM
I want to go fly, are you coming too ;},,, glad yo liked my Lost Boys, I hesitated to post it because it was sad,
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 1:49 PM
I am comming.... Debbie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Esquire Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 3:11 PM
Dear Anne Lise, A very well thought out POEM. I live on a mountain and have seen Eagle Soar (Fly) and I have 2 gardens and have seen the Butterfly Flutter (Fly) Two different aspects of Flying Perfectly meshed togetherin this Laureatus POETRY. I bow to YOUR Talent and Wisdom.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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March 28, 2013 at 3:40 PM
Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 25, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Oh, I love it, Anne-Lise. Good suggestion. I wrote 21 poems in a 24 hours period yesterday. I write what comes to my spirit. And it was a record :). Have an enjoyable, stretched out Sunday. Always wish Sunday is longer than it is :) Love ya, Toquyen
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November 25, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Wooow....21 poems in 24 hours...woow !!! Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Richards Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 6:45 PM
Such a happy poem this is. So uplifting, it makes me want to try!
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 1:58 AM
Carrie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Austin Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:13 AM
I've tried it, Anne Lise - Used to dream of falling off a cliff, and was scared out of my wits, but I told myself, before I went to sleep, I could fly. Sure enough, the next time the dream happened I remembered I could fly and instead of falling I flew like a bird. It was one of the most wonderful dreams I've ever had. Congrats on the selection. daver
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:17 AM
In your dream or your fantasy you can do it !!! - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 1:23 AM
A lovely poem you have penned, Anne-Lise. It is indeed a nice feeling to fly. Sometimes, I dream of flying and seems I don't like to wake up. Thanks for sharing and congratulations for your feature free verse poem. Take care!
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August 9, 2012 at 3:40 AM
Leonora, thank you for congrats, visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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August 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Congrats dear heart :)
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Ed, thank you for congrats and visit. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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July 16, 2012 at 8:58 PM
AHA, I went back to one of your first poems and found one I had not yet seen. It's wonderful!!
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:41 AM
Andrea, thank you for visit and comments my "old one" - oxox love Anne-Lise
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June 1, 2012 at 12:15 AM
Ah how many men have dreamed of that freedom moment where one just lifts and is no longer held in the restraints of their weighted humdrum bodies, lives or minds.. you embraced that wonderfully anne lise... tyvm karen
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June 1, 2012 at 12:27 AM
Karen, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 9, 2012 at 10:43 AM
just checking out your oldies, love this. harry
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Thank you Harry for visit my poem and comments it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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April 8, 2012 at 5:04 PM
I feel free indeed.This poem is wonderful.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Thank you Elliott for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Hillmer Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 5:42 AM
This is VERY WELL WRITTEN! GREAT JOB!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Melanie for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Maria Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 7:33 AM
I like very much the message of this poem absolutely freedom ! now it remain just to "spread my wings" and fly away.........thanks for comment
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Thank you Maria for reading my poem to day.Yes spread yours wings and fly away. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Rhinem Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Smile ˜ How's my beautiful little teddy bear girl * I hope she's feeling like a beautiful queen upon this gift of a glorious day * Sweet beautiful AnneLise * Merry Christmas to You * My love always, John!:) ˜
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January 27, 2012 at 4:21 AM
Thank you John.oxox love Anne-Lise
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December 13, 2011 at 4:04 PM
It's so beautiful! You can almost feel this freedom...
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Elle,glad you like it. Nerly Christmas time....dont stress :"Christmas is coming"OXOX Anne-Lise
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December 4, 2011 at 7:54 AM
That is right..We have to use our fantasy..Sara..Thanks for stopping by...
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Thank you Sara. Take car and do not stress. "Christmas is coming" OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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December 2, 2011 at 9:03 PM
* "'USE YOUR FANTASY' * I LOVE THAT BUT I ALSO LOVE * FAITH * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL ANNE-LISE * I DO LOVE PRETTY BUTTERFLIES * TO SOAR LIKE AN EAGLE * LOOKING HIGHLY FORWARD TO THAT GLORIOUS DAY * OVER THE MOUNTAINS ACROSS THE SEA * OF TRANQUILLITY * LOVE YOUR PRECIOUS VERSE & THANK YOU * FOR YOUR BEAUTIES SWEET KIND VISIT * WARM UNTO MY HEART * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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December 14, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Sarah. Take car and do not stress. "Christmas is coming" OXOX Love Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 2:09 PM
YES YOU CAN !!!! "Try it, use yuor fantasy...." Love from Anne-Lise and winter Norway
Rhinem Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 12:18 PM
What if I use my get out of jail card free, would that work??? ˜ John!:) ˜
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