Feel

FEEL What do you see when you color, the day what do you feel when you hope, that l say look at that we're alive. What do you gain if you reflect, on the pain what do you feel when you hope, that l say 'look at that, we're alive'. Energized, by the sea of the waves , in the glow floating up, to the sun because we know that we'll say 'look at that, we're alive' Safe and near do you see all the beauty, that's ahead do you feel all the hope look at that, we're alive look at that do you feel, do you see, we're alive. (C) J.Elston

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John Fleming

Date: 10/29/2017 5:59:00 AM

The one quality of your poems that shines the brightest is indeed this imparted sense of euphoria that associates throughout. It is obvious to the reader that here is a person, even when you are writing when somewhat down or depressed, who genuinely loves life despite all its tragedies and sadness...and within it all sees everything of the splendour. You are always a joy to read, Jackie! My very best wishes. :) john

John Fleming
Date: 11/1/2017 1:56:00 PM

I am moved by your fighting spirit and positive outlook...it is an example to us all! My warmest regards as always. :) john

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 10/29/2017 6:22:00 AM

lm convinced we need to 'feel it' then we'll 'know it' ...then we write etc etc lm bedbound with severe CFS/ME & l can honestly say l would never have found the right words for my own poems before l was ill. There is always some good that comes out of bad..we may not see it at the time, but with insight we understand the meaning of it hopefully at a later date....i did.& that makes me happy :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/28/2017 4:00:00 PM

Look at that! I'm happy to be alive...and happy you are too...

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 2/10/2018 5:54:00 PM

lv just realised when l re read my message today..l think l called your first name as Michael..but its Arturo..is that correct? sorry if l made mistake. best wishes, Jackie

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 10/29/2017 4:17:00 AM

I'm always amazed at the creative world around us..so much to take in..I'm always inspired when l look. Have a great day Micheal..and thank you, for taking time reading my little poems, its very kind of you. Jackie.