FEEL

Breezes, sunshine and kisses feel as ever on my skin; in that way, I have not aged at all
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Krampe Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 9:31 AM
It's funny, isn't it, how we stay young inside and it;'s just the outside that gets wrinkly :)
Cwiak Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:20 PM
I must be the cumudgeon of the group. Times hit people in different ways. I'm glad yours have not made you age. Nicely penned, CayCay.
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Oh, but the mirror says I have - I make a point not to wear glasses when I'm in front of it, even if I do stick the mascara wand in my eye! It is on the inside that I have retained youth, but the shell - well, as I said - I do not look! I have to close and go look up 'cumudgeon' with my glasses on. Thank you, Dan ... CayCay
Manassian Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:37 PM
I see congrats are in order for this. :) Aging....hits us hard, but you let us live vicariously in youth through your lines. Hugs
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Hi, Sweetie - Thank you and best wishes ... CayCay
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:51 AM
BRAVO Cay Cay... may you stay young for ever! Best wishes, Keith
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:37 AM
You, too Keith - we can manage that on the inside. Thank you for your comments ... CayCay
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 11:43 PM
I think of my self as fine wine, I just keep getting better with age! ( Its not true but I think it! LOL )
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:38 AM
It is true, we do get better for we, ideally, become wiser. Thanks, Arthur - be well and content ... CayCay
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December 25, 2015 at 10:06 PM
Hi CayCay, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:41 AM
You are being way too hard on yourself. Let 'shame' go. Your efforts and support are most apparent on Soup. You have nothing to regret in my humble opinion. So stop that talk! Happy New Year, Happy New You - living without regret! Love to you and yours ... CayCay
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December 22, 2015 at 9:46 AM
I love this excellent write of yours my dear friend, Caycay? Can I call you lovely sis too? :))) I'll embrace your poem and take it as one of my beauty tip poem. :)))Thank you so much and Big Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Thanks for sharing! Merry Christmas to you and your family! I'll be back to read more. Best wishes always! love lots and big hug, Leonora
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Such sweet and delightful comments! Happy New Year, Leonora - may it be filled with perfect health, joy and prosperity. Thank you for your comments and presence - glad I found your page the other day ... CayCay
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:19 PM
With such reasoning, CayCay, you will stay forever young:) ~ Congratulations on this lovely win. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you all the best for Christmas and the New Year. Blessings. // paul
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Only the body ages, not the inner spirit, right? Thank you for your comments and wishes which I, in turn, extend to you and yours. So far, so wonderful, day 10 and all is well! All the best .... CayCay
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December 20, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Congrats CayCay! The more I read , the more I enjoy your writings :) *smiles*
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:46 AM
A pleasure and joy getting to know you and your poetry. As for smiles, you've given me more than a few. Thanks, LuLoo ... CayCay
Gibson Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Beautifully expressed, CayCay; my sentiments exactly. Congratulations.
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Ah, Faye - keep that sentiment always and be blessed. Thank you ... CayCay
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:03 AM
CayCAy, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Thank you, sweet lady ... CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:12 AM
you warm my heart, cay.. sweet congrats w and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"
Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for taking the time and effort to encourage creativity - I am grateful for sponsors and so is my muse ... CayCay
Tor Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 5:42 AM
Excellent win CayCay Congratulations!
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Thank you so much, Michael. Happy New Year - Happy Everything ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 7:42 PM
I love what you are saying here. I feel just like you, dearie.
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 8:10 PM
It's true, right? In so many ways all that changes with time is the mirror. Well, about 'feel' - massages, as time passes, feel better than ever! So glad you enjoyed it - thank you ... CayCay
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December 19, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Forever young! Merry Christmas young lady.
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 3:36 PM
And happy merries to you and yours! CayCay
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December 19, 2015 at 4:55 AM
How could you aged, dear CayCay at the moment you never have stopped dreaming? Beautiful! Merry Christmas to you and your family!
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 9:43 AM
A favorite quote of mine is, 'our age is none of our business lest it limit our decisions and choices.' I appreciate you sweet comment and try to limit my aging to mirrors only! Merry Christmas, dear one - may joy find and hold you ... CayCay
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