Feeding the Ducklings

She has a smile today instead of a frown
Lately, age and infirmity have gotten her down
“I’m off to feed the ducks and ducklings” she said
“With grain and some old pieces of bread.
Come with me and see how sweet they are,
The nice pond in the park is really not so far”…
So off we went to see these harbingers of spring
To this elderly woman a bit of joy they bring
A reminder that as the seasons again turn round
Sometimes in small things our happiness is found…

5/8/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 17, 2016 at 5:52 PM
BARBARA, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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June 14, 2016 at 9:06 AM
A good poem well written x love the take on it x
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June 6, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Barbara, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
May Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Beautiful write Barbara... GL in the contest..
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May 20, 2016 at 10:30 AM
A relatable piece, Barbara, for the older folks, perhaps retired with time on their hands where they can spend in sheer enjoyment. I always enjoy the ducks and geese in public places; even the ones that make me slow down while they block traffic. In two places here there are signs posted against feeding them. Well-done.
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May 13, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Delightful Barbara! Beautiful couplet rhyming and sentiment... Best wishes, Keith
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May 7, 2016 at 12:55 PM
- You gives the reader a lovely image, Barbara - Beautiful for the contest, good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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