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February Rain

rain caressing limbs transforms into crushing ice duplicitous destruction enveloping trees splintering Appendages suffering spiral fractures winter rhetoric cracked branches screaming in pain imminent amputation

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 9:48:00 PM

congratulations on three poems making it thru round one, Abe. This is great work!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 6:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry X 3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Abe. Love Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2011 4:17:00 AM

Congrats Abe on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv.. good luck...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2011 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your work being featured this week..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/18/2011 12:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Date: 6/2/2010 4:26:00 PM

Another poem that made it through the first round. The imagey is wonderful. Best of luck in the finals. Karen

Date: 5/31/2010 8:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/31/2010 5:31:00 PM

congrats on the first round progress!! great poem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2010 9:31:00 AM

Congrats Abe on both your entries making it to the first round competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend.. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand

Date: 5/31/2010 8:16:00 AM

You capture the mood well Abe with this worthy Is round winner.Rgds Brian

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/13/2010 10:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/13/2010 5:32:00 PM

Congrats Abe, on "February Rain" being featured. Vince

Sue Mason

Date: 4/13/2010 2:50:00 PM

Awesome write and excellent use of this form, Abe !! I can almost hear the sound in this one!! Congratulations on having your writing featured this week here at the Soup !!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/13/2010 12:19:00 PM

Abe~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Well done. Laura :)

Daver Austin

Date: 4/12/2010 2:09:00 PM

Congrats, Abe, on this selection. Thank heaven the Crackin' is nearly finished. I just saw "Clash of the Titans. Don't know how to spell the monster Crackin. Enjoyed this one mucho. Love, daver

Janette Fisher

Date: 4/12/2010 12:17:00 PM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2010 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congrats Abe on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent write to feature and share..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 10:26:00 AM

An awesome Choka...filled with great imagery, Abe! My congratulations on your win in Mac's "Anything Goes Contest" Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/12/2010 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Mac's contest Abe. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2010 7:29:00 AM

I liked this one a lot when I first read it. Glad to see you got on the wiinner's list! LUv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 6:21:00 PM

Congrats Abe on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. amazing write ... a wonderful win.. for a talented poet.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2010 6:04:00 PM

Another amazing write from one amazing guy!! Congratulations on this poem that makes me cringe with fright! Nature at it's raging peak! Well done dear Abe! Love, Carrie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/6/2010 5:26:00 AM

Good one indeed,you came back rocking the soup..wonderful..Charma

Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2010 6:34:00 PM

What a beautiful vivid picture you paint with words.. poor tree... we had an ice storm in my area a few years back that destroyed many, many a tree, they just cracked and splintered...and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, Something to say