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February Rain

rain caressing limbs
transforms into crushing ice
duplicitous destruction

enveloping trees
splintering Appendages
suffering spiral fractures

winter rhetoric 
cracked branches screaming in pain
imminent amputation

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2011 9:48:00 PM congratulations on three poems making it thru round one, Abe. This is great work! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/9/2011 6:47:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry X 3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Abe. Love Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/7/2011 4:17:00 AM Congrats Abe on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv.. good luck... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/19/2011 7:33:00 AM Congratulations on your work being featured this week..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/18/2011 12:48:00 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Date: 6/2/2010 4:26:00 PM Another poem that made it through the first round. The imagey is wonderful. Best of luck in the finals. Karen Login to Reply

Date: 5/31/2010 8:48:00 PM Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 5/31/2010 5:31:00 PM congrats on the first round progress!! great poem! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/31/2010 9:31:00 AM Congrats Abe on both your entries making it to the first round competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend.. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 5/31/2010 8:16:00 AM You capture the mood well Abe with this worthy Is round winner.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/13/2010 10:47:00 PM Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 4/13/2010 5:32:00 PM Congrats Abe, on "February Rain" being featured. Vince Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 4/13/2010 2:50:00 PM Awesome write and excellent use of this form, Abe !! I can almost hear the sound in this one!! Congratulations on having your writing featured this week here at the Soup !! Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 4/13/2010 12:19:00 PM Abe~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Well done. Laura :) Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/12/2010 2:09:00 PM Congrats, Abe, on this selection. Thank heaven the Crackin' is nearly finished. I just saw "Clash of the Titans. Don't know how to spell the monster Crackin. Enjoyed this one mucho. Love, daver Login to Reply

Janette Fisher Date: 4/12/2010 12:17:00 PM Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/12/2010 11:13:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe. May you have many more features. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/12/2010 5:28:00 AM Congrats Abe on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent write to feature and share..luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/15/2010 10:26:00 AM An awesome Choka...filled with great imagery, Abe! My congratulations on your win in Mac's "Anything Goes Contest" Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/12/2010 12:13:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Mac's contest Abe. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/12/2010 7:29:00 AM I liked this one a lot when I first read it. Glad to see you got on the wiinner's list! LUv,Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/11/2010 6:21:00 PM Congrats Abe on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. amazing write ... a wonderful win.. for a talented poet.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/11/2010 6:04:00 PM Another amazing write from one amazing guy!! Congratulations on this poem that makes me cringe with fright! Nature at it's raging peak! Well done dear Abe! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/6/2010 5:26:00 AM Good one indeed,you came back rocking the soup..wonderful..Charma Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/5/2010 6:34:00 PM What a beautiful vivid picture you paint with words.. poor tree... we had an ice storm in my area a few years back that destroyed many, many a tree, they just cracked and splintered...and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, Something to say Login to Reply

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