February Funny Bone

February Funny Bone

I know a young lady so fine
Her good looks almost made me blind
I bought some dark shades
To cut down the glaze
And now that young lady is mine


Curtis Moorman
5 February 2012

For Linda-Maries contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit..I prefer the sonnet style that the rhyme scheme is like this abab, cdcd, efef,gg with ten syllable count in it there is a change around line 4 to 7 with the last two lines a summary but for the contest I did the Italian style..TSara
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 4:25 PM
awesome limerick. you should write more. you are already one of the clerihew kings!!
A   Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 2:54 AM
Curtis, aweee... your a smooth one Curtis... a funny bone always hit with perfect timing... love your limerick..xox~pd
Song Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 4:53 PM
Perfect syll count and all!! Hey...this is awesome!! I can totally see u in line at the drug store buying shades to carry out this gig!! ha ha..enjoyed this one, Curtis. Gwendolen
Eastman Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Bravo! LOL. Fun read.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Soup mail x
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 5:05 AM
Like it Curtis, still smiling x
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