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February Funny Bone

February Funny Bone I know a young lady so fine Her good looks almost made me blind I bought some dark shades To cut down the glaze And now that young lady is mine Curtis Moorman 5 February 2012 For Linda-Maries contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2013 7:17:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit..I prefer the sonnet style that the rhyme scheme is like this abab, cdcd, efef,gg with ten syllable count in it there is a change around line 4 to 7 with the last two lines a summary but for the contest I did the Italian style..TSara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2013 4:25:00 PM

awesome limerick. you should write more. you are already one of the clerihew kings!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2012 2:54:00 AM

Curtis, aweee... your a smooth one Curtis... a funny bone always hit with perfect timing... love your limerick..xox~pd

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/8/2012 4:53:00 PM

Perfect syll count and all!! Hey...this is awesome!! I can totally see u in line at the drug store buying shades to carry out this gig!! ha ha..enjoyed this one, Curtis. Gwendolen

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/8/2012 8:36:00 AM

Bravo! LOL. Fun read.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2012 11:30:00 AM

Soup mail x

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2012 5:05:00 AM

Like it Curtis, still smiling x