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*KT* "I love you Sam", is what she says to me. Do her actions say the same? I know she belongs to another, but I want her just the same. I get lost, become transfixed from the beauty in her eyes. That is why I tried for that first kiss you pulled back to my surprise. Now here we are taking loves chances. After so much time apart, your memory never faded I've kept it away safely to precious for my heart! You see, it's in a place that only God can hold. For it's tucked away securely... Right next to my soul!! Samuel Brooks 1/24/2010 ChocolateWoW

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Date: 1/25/2010 6:52:00 PM
Luv is beautiful Sam... if something is meant to be God will work it out... better believe it... enjoyed your words and the way u pulled the poem together in thought... emotional write my friend... "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:55:00 AM
There is little that can match the feeling of reconnecting with a lost love, Samuel. This is a wonderful tribute to your unyeilding dedication to KT. And after reading Jared's blog, I would like to welcome you to the Poetry Soup family! I look forward to reading more of your fine poetry. Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2010 4:17:00 PM
Very nice poem.also stopping by to say hello and hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:43:00 PM
I love those last few lines the most.... a really nice poem...
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:52:00 PM
Tell Samuel this is a very nice love poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:39:00 PM
i KNOW HOW YOU FEEL KEEP IT UP
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