Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

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*KT*


"I love you Sam", is what she says to me.
       Do her actions say the same?
            I know she belongs to another, 
                 but I want her just the same.

I get lost, become transfixed
       from the beauty in her eyes.
That is why I tried for that first kiss
       you pulled back to my surprise.

Now here we are taking loves chances.

       After so much time apart,
your memory never faded
          I've kept it away safely 
               to precious for my heart!
You see, it's in a place that only God can hold.
For it's tucked away securely...
               Right next to my soul!!

Samuel Brooks
1/24/2010
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 25, 2010 at 6:52 PM Luv is beautiful Sam... if something is meant to be God will work it out... better believe it... enjoyed your words and the way u pulled the poem together in thought... emotional write my friend... "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire January 25, 2010 at 7:55 AM There is little that can match the feeling of reconnecting with a lost love, Samuel. This is a wonderful tribute to your unyeilding dedication to KT. And after reading Jared's blog, I would like to welcome you to the Poetry Soup family! I look forward to reading more of your fine poetry. Love, carolyn

Colleen Bono January 24, 2010 at 4:17 PM Very nice poem.also stopping by to say hello and hope all is well with you.

Constance La France January 24, 2010 at 2:43 PM I love those last few lines the most.... a really nice poem...

Marty Owens January 24, 2010 at 1:52 PM Tell Samuel this is a very nice love poem...Enjoyed...Marty

Amber Jenkins January 24, 2010 at 1:39 PM i KNOW HOW YOU FEEL KEEP IT UP