Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Featured Poet****chocolate Wow

**A Sweet Waltz**

As I kissed her lips
tasting her candy glaze
she bended ever so slowly
for a little of this mayonnaise.
And I said arise baby, 
don't stay in that stance.
stand up, we'll embrace
and start this love dance.

A freestyle by a dear friend of mine who gave me permission to post this.
I hope you all enjoy. Please, he wants to hear your opinion.... He will be reading..... 


Samuel Brooks
1/19/2010
"Chocolate WoW."

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Skat A February 17, 2014 at 9:00 AM I love the sweet Waltz, Chocolate WOW! Mmmmm, all day. Thanks for the visit on my blog.

Nicole Sharon Brown January 22, 2010 at 4:52 AM This is more than cute! This is hot!

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2010 at 12:41 PM It's a cute poem!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 20, 2010 at 6:31 AM Well the words of this poem inspired me to just post The Art of Making Love for u to read and your friend too.. so we all inspire each other with themes especially in the LUV department... especially sensual write.. enjoyed.. my kinda poetry... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Marty Owens January 20, 2010 at 6:29 AM I like the reference to mayonnaise!!! This is a hot poem...enjoyed...Marty

Brian Strand January 20, 2010 at 12:34 AM Very romantic images Jp.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2010 at 9:57 AM Jared, thanks for posting this for Samuel. I enjoyed the romance in this write very much and hope Samuel becomes part of the Soup Family. Very nice! Love, Carolyn