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Feathers In the Wind

Vultures in circle Dust trails seen in the distance Sand Creek Massacre *¬ One hundred and sixty souls Now just feathers in the wind http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/indigenous-americans-2.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/12/2015 7:59:00 PM

huge James your last two lines are enigmatic and symbolic.. love the use of feathers as metaphor... its like fallen angels ..--olive eloisa xxx

James Fraser
Date: 5/14/2015 3:02:00 PM

I really do enjoy writing about the American indigenous Olive. I feel close to them strangely enough, hugs, James xxx

James Foulk

Date: 4/8/2011 1:54:00 PM

a nice piece of poetry, enjoyed it. thank you for reading clear creek and for your comment.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/10/2011 2:17:00 PM

Great poem, James. Thanks for your kind comments and congrats to you too : ) Jack

James Peranteau

Date: 3/10/2011 8:08:00 AM

A vivid glimps of reality Dear poet; done well here in your write ! Awesome ! Have a great day James...much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2011 11:14:00 AM

When we visit sites that were once battlefields, it's hard not to think of the people whose lives were lost there. You created a vivid image of the Sand Creek Massacre site, James. Very fine work! Love, Carolyn