FEATHERLESS ANGELS

Featherless angels, guardians of the land 
Hands that reach out to give a helping hand 
They have smiles that gleam and melt a cold heart 
They bring bright sunshine when hope seems to part

They are like bright  lights in somber places 
They give gold glimmer to gloomy faces 
They are like fountains where greatest love flow 
They are like armors when fiercest winds blow 

They don't have wings but they can fly 
For their soaring deeds touch the sky

Featherless angels poetry contest 
2nd place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/6/2023 3:43:00 AM
Beautiful rhymes and flow of words, and you’ve described featherless angels so well here. I especially love the line “ They have smiles that gleam and melt a cold heart“ how beautiful are those that can touch our souls and lend a hand when in need, rare are those, and so precious and you’ve delivered so well about them. I love the finishing couplet too! Brilliant take. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning. Well Deserved
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Date: 11/6/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind and creative comments...
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