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Featherless Angels

Quote by author: Angel feather colors hold no meaning, if the messenger of God is not a paragon of virtue. Every year she wore the plumage with such grace and her beauty raptured every being around the liquid festival Caribana black and gold tassels pasted on each tender nipple She lost herself in a night of debauchery. One that took her further away from truth and the love that she so hungered for. dance little lady dance by a dirty man's glance you don't stand a chance That night she went too far and ended up by the side of the river. Her face streaked of mascara dripped onto a shattered heart, and turned into a million shards of glass. A celebration of life turned deadly cold beneath the winds of deceit. Sand blown bits of broken moon entered her soul as she lay still on the ground. Heaven's stars muted stunned, held space as a concrete angel invisible but able touched by a glacial pulse noticed she was still breathing but scarcely, so wrapping the dying girl in feathers woven from God's fibrous root, she washed the red off her soaked plumage, and cleaned up her wounded back. Two vestal hands bathed her with life's essence, and just like that, she was born again. "Choose Life" was the last thing she heard uttered to her faint ear. Then she heard the sound of a beautiful silence, as the Angel of God spread her glorious veiny wings and flew away. the grass held its dew and the wind blew a woman child grew

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Date: 11/6/2023 2:46:00 AM
Dear rose, i read this few times, i really love how you’ve written this, the storytelling and depth of your lines really stood out for me! A very unique and creative write this is, so different! I really love how this story ended! And also your quote is deep. I especially love “ A celebration of life turned deadly cold beneath the winds of deceit.”and also the ending as you wrote “ Choose Life" was the last thing she heard “soul stirring really! Impactful! Congratulations on winning.well deservd
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Date: 11/6/2023 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement dear friend, I was so eager to please you and do a great job. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 11/1/2023 12:45:00 PM
A very spiritual write on the blessing of forgiveness and renewal, also like the contrast of a concrete angel~
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Date: 11/1/2023 3:49:00 PM
Sometimes the things we cannot see like Angels persay are more concreate than reality at times such as these. Thanks for reading my poem dear Michell :)
Date: 10/31/2023 2:45:00 PM
a brilliant poem about a fallen angel. So much vivid imagery that gave beauty to your poem. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 10/31/2023 6:26:00 PM
I appreciate your comment Sara, so glad you enjoyed it
Date: 10/31/2023 9:27:00 AM
Brilliant Haibun. A fallen angel who did not know what he was going in for. Blessings.
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Date: 10/31/2023 6:26:00 PM
Thanks you for stopping by Victor, I love this form, it allows me to express the story at its best,

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