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Poetry/Haibun/Featherless Angels
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1594-005-28
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 28, 2023
For the International Contest, Featherless Angels
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 11/06/2023

First Place

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" I will send them without wings so that no one suspects they are angels." God
I have had cats since I was six years old and got one for Christmas, she was pure white and fluffy, I called her Snowball. Since then I cannot live without a cat in my life and God always sends me one. I have never purchased a cat. They just come to me as a stray lost soul, or someone cannot keep their cat or in the case of my mother's cat, inherited. And my present cat was because my sister could not keep her, way too fluffy she said. Each one has been my best friend. Each one my sweetest companion. I love their purring sounds, stroking their soft fur, their little kisses in the morning and even those big meows, my cat sings to me like a little bird. I love that so much. I am sure God knows when a person is lonely or sad and he sends a pet angel. These featherless angels fill me with love. My grandma used to say that I was born with an old soul, my mother said I had the saddest eyes, and I seldom smiled. But, with a cat beside me I am filled with happiness. God knows what he is doing but in time he calls them home and my heart is shattered, broken and I grief the loss deeply. Then, magically another cat will come to me, for there is always room in my heart until I kiss them goodbye with tears.
held my angel cat until her last gasp of life ... and then held her more

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Date: 11/6/2023 7:07:00 AM
Pets become our family to some of us. Warmhearted poem, just love your work. Enjoyed reading my friend. Many blessings and love your way
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Constance La France
Date: 11/6/2023 9:03:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 11/6/2023 1:41:00 AM
Dear Constance, i really love the quote used here too and also the way you’ve woven this haibun so flawlessly! And with such sincerity truly made my heart beam and feel so much! Your love for cats and how you’ve referred to them as featherless angels that make you smile amidst all the grief and troubles in the world, is so well expressed and delivered! I love the haiku too at the end! CONGRATULATIONS on winning! Thank you for writing! Well deserved win!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/6/2023 9:04:00 PM
Ink, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the nice comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 10/29/2023 11:55:00 AM
Cried like a babe at last word here. Named our pure white cat Cotton. My Jim is truly a human cat,have poetry bout that on psp. We’ve had dogs & cats both til our lsst cat died 3 yrs ago. Our doxie Gigi, i actually call God’s sen angel when i whisper w/her. Love this titke, concept, belief…poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2023 6:01:00 AM
Sally, thank you so much for sharing with me, and for the compliment, blessings
Date: 10/29/2023 11:31:00 AM
Featherless friends. Loneliness or happiness, a good friendly soul to share with.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2023 6:02:00 AM
Jay, thank you so much for the comment, some who do not have pets may not understand how amazing they are to lonely people, blessings
Date: 10/29/2023 6:38:00 AM
Great storytelling my friend.. so sweet that your cats are your featherless angels... love it..
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2023 6:03:00 AM
Silent, thank you so much for the compliment. What else can they be, blessings and love
Date: 10/28/2023 5:20:00 PM
I so believe cats show up to comfort. My daughter has had that happen. God’s gifts…purr-fect
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2023 6:04:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the purr-fect comment, blessings

Book: Shattered Sighs