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Feather Pillows

down feather pillows I bask in the luxury 'til sharp quills stab me Written on 7/12/2015

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Hannington Mumo

Date: 7/21/2015 11:24:00 AM

You create just a crisp message with admirable economy of words. Not even a single idle letter! Superb! Magnificent! And an indisputable 7+!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/21/2015 2:42:00 PM

Thank you so much for your generous words of kindness, Hannington! I really appreciate it and the rating, too! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 5:52:00 PM

The imagery is incredible a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/18/2015 3:17:00 PM

Thank you, Eve :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 10:53:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, Jan :)

John Lawless

Date: 7/16/2015 6:52:00 AM

A sneery with a subtly hidden metaphor. Could that be the "sharp quill" of the muse "stabbing" you.....TO WRITE....WELL DONE. Very nice senryu

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, John! I appreciate your comments very much :)

John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2015 6:55:00 AM

A "sneery"....a sneery....how I hate this overzealous "spellcheck" and its limited vocabulary....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 11:59:00 PM

OUCH. that would be NO FUN. Congrats on the win!!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:51:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/15/2015 11:27:00 PM

Must be in allegory right? Clever poetic penning here. Thorns that spoil the softness. I see u won wow congrats. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:51:00 PM

Thank you! I'll check out your page :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:19:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thank you, Linda :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 11:07:00 PM

Sleep well on your win, Laura. Viv x

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:50:00 PM

Ha! Not sure if I can, Viv :)

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 10:48:00 PM

Laura:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Skat :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/15/2015 12:39:00 PM

The ecstasy and agony of a downy softness verses prickly quills, there is always a price to pay when seeking perfection. Emile.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/15/2015 3:47:00 PM

Yes, that is right, Emile :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/14/2015 2:26:00 PM

- Lovely luxury pillow poems :) - I wish you good luck in the contest, Laura ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/14/2015 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Anne Lise....luxury pillows with a twist! ;)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/13/2015 11:59:00 PM

Lol!!! A fabulous write here, enjoyed as always excellent......7!... Love...A.M.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/14/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thanks so very much Afolabi. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/13/2015 11:27:00 PM

Almost cost me an eyeball, once. Fortunately I've got the other two..... Nice Haiku, Laura. Viv x

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/14/2015 2:03:00 PM

AhaHA, Viv! Good one :)

Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/13/2015 6:51:00 PM

Feathers that prick are not fun, are they! Good luck to you in the contest. I also wrote about feather pillows. ~~Darlene

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/13/2015 7:17:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Darlene! I appreciate it :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2015 4:46:00 PM

The best one I have read so far!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/13/2015 4:58:00 PM

Really? Lol, thanks Richard :D

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/13/2015 12:33:00 PM

Yes... that can be a pain. Interesting take on the contest theme. :) Good luck.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/13/2015 1:35:00 PM

They can't always be sweet and feathery! Thanks for stopping by, Eileen :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 3:12:00 AM

Ouch - great one laura:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/13/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thank you, Jan :)