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Feather Pillow

Soft pile of plumage, The pedestal of my dreams: Nest place of my thoughts.

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/21/2013 10:21:00 PM

This is short but very meaningful. Lots of imagery rolled up in a clever way. nice job

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2013 5:26:00 PM

I love the use of wordings you use Raul..lovely senryu

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2013 12:51:00 AM

Wow, I love this.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/15/2013 12:37:00 AM

Another gem from the Haiku/Senryu master...'The pedestal of my dreams'...WOW - Tim

Kyle Maples

Date: 3/14/2013 4:16:00 PM

I should probably have my head on my pillow more often... Love the poem!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/14/2013 11:43:00 AM

I am so attached to my pillow I sometimes think Im nuts..probably am, but it has nothing to do with the pillow. lol..love the poem. BG

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/14/2013 10:25:00 AM

nice words Raul...Seren

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/14/2013 10:40:00 AM

Thank you :)