Feather Pillow

Soft pile of plumage,
The pedestal of my dreams:
Nest place of my thoughts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 10:21 PM
This is short but very meaningful. Lots of imagery rolled up in a clever way. nice job
Chircop Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 5:26 PM
I love the use of wordings you use Raul..lovely senryu
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 12:51 AM
Wow, I love this.
Ryerson Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 12:37 AM
Another gem from the Haiku/Senryu master...'The pedestal of my dreams'...WOW - Tim
Maples Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 4:16 PM
I should probably have my head on my pillow more often... Love the poem!
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:43 AM
I am so attached to my pillow I sometimes think Im nuts..probably am, but it has nothing to do with the pillow. lol..love the poem. BG
Roberts Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 10:25 AM
nice words Raul...Seren
Moreno Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Thank you :)
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