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FEATHER IN THE STATION

a white feather turns in the stillness of the empty station~ slow spiral, soft drift, a small brightness mapping the quiet air as if the room were breathing it.
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July 9, 2026 at 2:53 AM
So vivid, it captures the soft, whispering descent of a feather, gliding gracefully through the air, each word delicately placed like a brushstroke on canvas.
George Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 9:50 PM
So picturesque trapping the silent, slow movement of a feather in minimum words.
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July 8, 2026 at 9:34 PM
Quiet in its execution but full of emotions.
Rolland Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 7:30 AM
just enjoyed this short poem, with such delicacy, thanks poet Sara
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