Feather Boa

all eyes on me as

boa hangs over my breast -

center stage effect










14 July 2015
Feather Contest 
Sponsor: SKAT A


image credit: gatsby1

imagerysexysenryu

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D.W. Rodgers

July 20, 2015 at 7:12 AM

HI Kim, Congrats on your win and a well centered integration of senryu and image.

Kim Merryman

July 17, 2015 at 10:38 PM

Great senryu, Kim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Bl Devnath

July 16, 2015 at 2:48 PM

Loved your acute image and wishing you congratulation too. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Terry

July 16, 2015 at 11:33 AM

An article from the past with a contemporary theme a la Lady Gaga or Brittany Spears but I know your writings go even deeper. Congrats on your win, Kim. You are one of my favs. :) Janece

Paul Callus

July 16, 2015 at 10:45 AM

You have many admirers here, Kim!:) Your provocative feather haiku is a winner on its own merits! Congratulations on a merited win! #7+ hugs // paul [missed out on this contest due to pressure of work.]

Jan Allison

July 16, 2015 at 10:39 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

July 16, 2015 at 9:48 AM

I love how each haiku takes us in a different direction !! This has a 'style' all its own !! Well done !!

Eve Roper

July 16, 2015 at 8:25 AM

I love the visual you have left, Kim, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs eve

Pandita Sietesantos

July 16, 2015 at 7:43 AM

Swinging back to offer congrats on your great win! Enjoyed the second read! Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

July 16, 2015 at 4:36 AM

Wow, this is so clever Kim. It deserves top placement! Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7

Noel Villarosa

July 16, 2015 at 2:47 AM

Congrats Kim on your impressive win. (^_^) Noel.

Ravi Sathasivam

July 16, 2015 at 1:50 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed reading your vivid senryu. TFS

Andrea Dietrich

July 15, 2015 at 11:52 PM

ooh la la, Congratulations.

Alexis Y.

July 15, 2015 at 11:38 PM

Kim, I just stopped by tonight to say congratulations on your awesome win. :-)Alexis

Lycia Harding

July 15, 2015 at 11:33 PM

I gotta dollah fo ya, hunny! Ha! Excellent win ya little vamp. xoxo

Lee Carter

July 15, 2015 at 11:21 PM

Loved this! Congrats : )

Poet Destroyer A

July 15, 2015 at 11:07 PM

Hi Kim, I want to know what you were thinking when you wrote this haiku. Besides the obvious. I love the pressure center here. This is one of my fav movies... Enjoyed.. congrats on the win... LINDA

Viv Wigley

July 15, 2015 at 10:52 PM

You probably can't see me because of the lights, but I'm at the front of your poem, wolf whistling and dribbling like a madman. WooHoo! Somebody call security! Great win, Kim, well done. Viv x