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Feasting on the Soup



                            Feasting on the Soup tonight,

                        A scrumptious fare of pure delight

                           A wonderous place, assuredly

                            And nary one darn calorie!

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Sara Kendrick

November 17, 2025 at 3:32 AM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Thank you for the humor to brighten my day. Way to go. Sara K

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 1:49 PM

:) thank you Sara, I'm glad my little poem brought you a smile <3

Rowena Velasco

September 18, 2025 at 7:31 AM

A playful and charming poem, Bj! The humor and lighthearted tone make “Feasting on the Soup” a delightful, guilt-free indulgence in words.

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 1:54 PM

Thank you Rowena, :) I love it when I can indulge in the guilt free indulgence of the rich and aromatic offered up on this yummy menu!

Kim Rodrigues

July 31, 2025 at 5:46 AM

Funny last line! Some days, Bj, the poems are great. I love those days! I eat them up! Happy Day!

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 1:56 PM

Yes, sometimes just devouring delicious whole bowls of delight, and dessert as well! :)

Victor Buhagiar

July 31, 2025 at 2:20 AM

Superb poetry. Glad you find lots of your poems calorie-free.

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:02 PM

Aw yes, calorie free and rich in wholesome energy packed delight! Its sort of feast or famine with me sometimes, I haven't often been able to feast at my favorite site over periods of time, but I believe that being away from Poetry Soup for long periods of time causes heartache, so here I am again, and trying to catch up on all the sweet comments I had missed! Thank you for all your visits and encouraging comments to my poems Victor, I :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 28, 2025 at 6:45 PM

And nary one darn calorie! It's win-win, BJ. I got a kick out of this poem. Delicious! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:04 PM

Thank you Evelyn, I'm glad you liked my poem :) <3

sara Etgen-Baker

July 28, 2025 at 4:44 PM

such cleverness! I like that PS is calorie free. Well done!

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:05 PM

Thank you Sara :) calorie free and so very delicious! :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 28, 2025 at 1:39 PM

Wonderful little posey with cute final line

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:06 PM

:) <3 thank you Andrea!

Tom Cunningham

July 28, 2025 at 8:23 AM

Enjoy your bowl of soup BJ, so many different flavours on here, something for everyone. Tom

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:10 PM

Mmm, it is delicious! It seems its feast or famine, I love devouring and savoring the delicious rich array on here, and then away such a long time, but here I am, catching up...somewhat! Yes, I love the spicy ones too, scrumptious!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 28, 2025 at 5:25 AM

Dear BJ, You had me grinning from the first spoonful to the last rhyme! Just the kind of joyful mischief we all need more of so delicious, clever, and guilt-free! I love how you turned a simple pleasure into a whimsical moment of pure delight. Summer Blessings, Dear BJ, Daniel

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:17 PM

Aw, that makes me happy :) Thank you so much Daniel!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 28, 2025 at 2:06 AM

- The bright and positive side of life, Bj :) - hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:18 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) <3

Sotto Poet

July 28, 2025 at 12:54 AM

Dear B.J., this is a pretty humorous poem. Relish every last drop of this delicious dish of soup! Pleasant to see your return. I appreciate the carefree atmosphere here; a free of fat meal looks like my ideal evening! Wishing you smooth sailing.

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:20 PM

Hm, yum, soup with relish! Yes! Who can beat the calorie free goodness of this soup? :)

Karen Jones

July 28, 2025 at 12:37 AM

Fun read!

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:20 PM

:) Thank you Karen :) <3

Valsa George

July 27, 2025 at 10:32 PM

A very light hearted poem, dear B.J. Enjoy the bowl full of savory Soup delight! Glad to see you back after an interval. Hope all is going on fine.

Bj Legros Kelley

November 17, 2025 at 2:23 PM

Thank you Valsa, yes, I am far too sporadically on site and enjoying all the fare of this wonderful Soup. I wasn't fine, had been struggling for a bit, but modern medicine along with a healthy dose of joy is bringing me back around :) It is good to be back again <3