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Feasting on the Soup

Feasting on the Soup tonight, A scrumptious fare of pure delight A wonderous place, assuredly And nary one darn calorie!

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2025 2:20:00 AM

Superb poetry. Glad you find lots of your poems calorie-free.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/28/2025 6:45:00 PM

And nary one darn calorie! It's win-win, BJ. I got a kick out of this poem. Delicious! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 4:44:00 PM

such cleverness! I like that PS is calorie free. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2025 1:39:00 PM

Wonderful little posey with cute final line

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2025 8:23:00 AM

Enjoy your bowl of soup BJ, so many different flavours on here, something for everyone. Tom

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/28/2025 5:25:00 AM

Dear BJ, You had me grinning from the first spoonful to the last rhyme! Just the kind of joyful mischief we all need more of so delicious, clever, and guilt-free! I love how you turned a simple pleasure into a whimsical moment of pure delight. Summer Blessings, Dear BJ, Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2025 2:06:00 AM

- The bright and positive side of life, Bj :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2025 12:54:00 AM

Dear B.J., this is a pretty humorous poem. Relish every last drop of this delicious dish of soup! Pleasant to see your return. I appreciate the carefree atmosphere here; a free of fat meal looks like my ideal evening! Wishing you smooth sailing.