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Feasting In the Dark

By Michael J Falotico Our bed is like the ocean.. Waves of passion cover our sanction.. I sway through the sheets like a hungry shark.. Searching for a meal or your sweet love in the dark.. A night of feasting on our prey, till the morning of a new day..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 1:18:00 PM

so very happy u were pleased with the finished product Michael luv... we received rave reviews as to our words blending so very well.. and yes.. am ready for collab number two or is it three ..when u are partner.. going to soup mail u lines tonight luv.. Jersey Girl says thankxxx to her W.K. in grateful creative mode luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2011 2:43:00 PM

What a feast this is, Michael. Great analogy poem for passion. ON my unnamed bird, me thinks it is fibromyalgia but can't be sure. First I will have my shoulder surgery this WEdnesday and then I can focus on what is making my other pain below the shoulder! (it's a separate issue. I was really hoping the surgery would resolve both things but doc says no it won't).

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2011 12:37:00 PM

Stunning passionate, what a joy to be feasting in the dark Mr. F.. I need to find myself a shark lol :) enjoyed this one, love Wilma

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/25/2011 9:05:00 AM

Awww, this is sweet, passionate and dark at the same time! Incredible writing, Michael :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/25/2011 6:37:00 AM

Soup Mail Michael..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 8:57:00 PM

oh lala my kinda sultry night Michael and a very passionate scenario luv.. two lovely people enjoying what comes naturally with attraction and emotion so intense.. new fav of course.. your Jersey Girl now texting hubby to read this piece oh.. one of my favs ..luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 6/24/2011 2:59:00 PM

A great methotic sound resonates from this piece~ENJOYED.....................God Bless~ ^Rick