Fearing and Floating

It was so large
The New York Barge

If you wish to see
The Statue of Liberty

You board the boat
And away you float

My ornery friend
(Lifelong-till the end)

Refused to board the barge
It was packed and looked large

So I took a bandana
Blindfolded Marianna

Led my ornery pal
To the mid-ship locale

She protested ardently
I reassured her cheerfully

Made it to the island
But I had to hold her hand

As we climbed to the top
Oh my, what a drop

This was the only way
Her fears I could allay

Marianna felt proud
She’d made it through the crowd

But to this very day
She scowls at me in play

Whenever I mention
Our New York vacation

Her fear of the sea
Seems now gone, you see

But I’ll hold off on buying a cruise
Because my dear friend I would lose

To this day she’s ornery
But she’ll never be ordinary



*Entry for Carol Browns Ornery Best Friends contest.  True story.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/14/2012 3:27:00 PM
Carol, you did it well in contest - Congrats !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:53:00 PM
carolyn congrats on your win, good thinking batman..David
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Date: 7/13/2012 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in my contest Carolyn. Thank you so much for your support always. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2012 2:46:00 AM
so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:09:00 PM
This is truly a fabulous write my friend! I love your playfulness throughout your poem! You did extraordinary with your write here Carolyn I'm glad to see you posting again! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:28:00 PM
great entry. funny how girls can hold hands and men will not. take care of your friend they are so few that can travel with you.
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