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Fearfulness Falls In Heavy Drops

Fearfulness falls in heavy drops On one who wonders About the tomorrow that was once a ten, And now is only a five. Life unwinds like a slowing watch Sowing deeds good and bad behind, ‘Til a wall of impenetrable fog remains For etching by the finger of forever. Fearfulness falls in heavy drops On one who wonders about tomorrow.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/10/2018 5:44:00 AM

I LOVE THE GREAT DEPTH OF THOUGHT IN THIS SUPERBLY CRAFTED POEM MY FRIEND!! A FAV... A GEM...

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2018 6:35:00 PM

Nicely crafted my friend...love & light...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/4/2018 1:02:00 PM

So much truth in your words my dearest , Sunlite. We see it too often but a little of hope and the sun will rise again! Love writing!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/3/2018 7:19:00 AM

Sunlite, this feels like slowly being overtaken in a fog of fate!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/4/2018 10:09:00 AM

I guess I missed the mark trying to express apprehension of the unknown. Thank you so much for commenting. You're appreciated.

Silent One

Date: 7/3/2018 6:59:00 AM

only if one is negative.. if we are positive then fearfulness will not fall at all... emotively expressed Sunlite..

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/4/2018 10:07:00 AM

Thank you for your comment, SO. I guess I intended to express the unknown rather than negativity.