Sunlite Wanter Poet Free verse

Fearfulness Falls In Heavy Drops

Fearfulness falls in heavy drops
On one who wonders 
About the tomorrow that was once a ten,
And now is only a five.

Life unwinds like a slowing watch
Sowing deeds good and bad behind,
‘Til a wall of impenetrable fog remains
For etching by the finger of forever.

Fearfulness falls in heavy drops
On one who wonders about tomorrow.

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Robert Lindley July 10, 2018 at 5:44 AM I LOVE THE GREAT DEPTH OF THOUGHT IN THIS SUPERBLY CRAFTED POEM MY FRIEND!! A FAV... A GEM...

Winged Warrior July 4, 2018 at 6:35 PM Nicely crafted my friend...love & light...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis July 4, 2018 at 1:02 PM So much truth in your words my dearest , Sunlite. We see it too often but a little of hope and the sun will rise again! Love writing!

Lyric Man July 3, 2018 at 7:19 AM Sunlite, this feels like slowly being overtaken in a fog of fate! Sunlite Wanter July 4, 2018 at 10:09 AM I guess I missed the mark trying to express apprehension of the unknown. Thank you so much for commenting. You're appreciated.

Silent One July 3, 2018 at 6:59 AM only if one is negative.. if we are positive then fearfulness will not fall at all... emotively expressed Sunlite.. Sunlite Wanter July 4, 2018 at 10:07 AM Thank you for your comment, SO. I guess I intended to express the unknown rather than negativity.