Paula Swanson Poet Rictameter

Fearful Steps

Foot steps,
slow and timid.
Such determination
to conquer fear of the unknown.
Ever wary of what lies just ahead.
Softly walking the path of life.
Never taking detours,
playing it safe.
Foot steps


Paula Swanson
June 1, 2012
For the contest Sound Of Emotion

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 5, 2012 at 11:10 AM A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Paula. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick June 4, 2012 at 3:40 PM Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A June 3, 2012 at 6:41 PM PAULA , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

Kash Poet June 3, 2012 at 1:53 PM Very nice Rictameter here Paula.Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud June 3, 2012 at 10:03 AM a slow-motion creak that spells caution so well scribed, paula.. congrats on your win in my side of the fence!..:) huggs!

David Williams June 3, 2012 at 5:32 AM Paula congrats on your win..David

Amy Green June 2, 2012 at 5:03 AM I agree with Russell, great entry.

Russell Sivey June 1, 2012 at 8:49 PM This is a fabulous write Paula! I really enjoyed the steps you take with each line having it's own emotion! Wonderfully done! Great Work!!

Richard Palmer June 1, 2012 at 6:12 PM nice write,Paula