Fear Stalks My Dreams

I'm lost in an unforgiving jungle! The trail I'm following is sporadic and confusing and as the undergrowth closes in, it's suffocating; making it nearly impossible to breathe. The high humidity leaves me drenched in sweat: the heat is unbearable, my every muscle screams. Panic is spreading! Chills creep up my spine, and I taste fear's bitter dregs on my tongue: as its pungent odor wafts from every pore. Like a mantra, I keep repeating a desperate prayer: "Please, God, save me." The ground under my feet feels spongy, and I hear the rustle of hidden terrors in the leaf debris. Whatever possessed me to attempt this hike? As darkness descends, the dense canopy entombs me. My face is a scarlet mask of scratches: and acid tears burn my cheeks! The pounding beat of my heart is overpowering: and I collapse into a sobbing heap. Fear stalks my dreams in an exhaustive sleep; unsure if I'll ever awaken: or even wish to.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Steele Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Congrats on your win, Emile. Good write.
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Randy, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Harper Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Emile, you made me feel an increasing sense of fear as the poem went on. Very convincing, bravo.
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Thanks Sheri, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 12:22 PM
I felt the emotion Emile, amazing imagery in this write, should do well in the contest!
Pinet Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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