Fear of the Wild

Into the mossy woods I creep,
Where daylight flees and shadows leap.
Who knows what creatures slink and prowl,
Seen only by the hooting owl?

What’s this I hear? A swishing sound!
I freeze. I feel my heartbeat pound.
Although this seems a foolish stunt,
I must be brave: I’m on the hunt.

The prey I seek’s a savage fright
With claws that gash and fangs that bite.
It’s ten feet long with sleek white hair.
You guessed it: it’s the polar bear.

What’s that you say? That I must go
To tracts of arctic sea and snow?
If I did that, then don’t you see,
This cunning beast might hunt for me!

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Date Written: January 6, 2019
Contest: Into the Woods, sponsored by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win, Ed, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Morris Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Y. Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Hi Ed, You take your reader on a "scary" stroll through the woods. Great job. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Morris Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Alexis.
One Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:27 AM
A scary take on the contest Ed, you are right you dont know what is hiding in the woods.. Congrats on your placement in the contest..
Morris Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Silent One.
Wise Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Another playful and witty little masterpiece! :)
Awtry Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:08 AM
I was gripped with suspense and tiptoeing through your verses and no I didn't guess it! I was imagining a white haired fiend of mythical realms...This was thoroughly entertaining. I enjoyed every word!
Morris Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 9:19 AM
That's the effect I was hoping for. Thanks for letting me know it worked. :-)
Flood Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 7:09 AM
At last, someone who actually gets the reason I hunt crocodiles in England! Well done, Ed.
Morris Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 9:18 AM
:-)
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