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Fear of the Wild

Into the mossy woods I creep, Where daylight flees and shadows leap. Who knows what creatures slink and prowl, Seen only by the hooting owl? What’s this I hear? A swishing sound! I freeze. I feel my heartbeat pound. Although this seems a foolish stunt, I must be brave: I’m on the hunt. The prey I seek’s a savage fright With claws that gash and fangs that bite. It’s ten feet long with sleek white hair. You guessed it: it’s the polar bear. What’s that you say? That I must go To tracts of arctic sea and snow? If I did that, then don’t you see, This cunning beast might hunt for me! --- Date Written: January 6, 2019 Contest: Into the Woods, sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Ed, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ed Morris
Date: 1/19/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 1/13/2019 7:54:00 AM
Hi Ed, You take your reader on a "scary" stroll through the woods. Great job. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis.
Date: 1/13/2019 7:27:00 AM
A scary take on the contest Ed, you are right you dont know what is hiding in the woods.. Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Ed Morris
Date: 1/13/2019 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One.
Date: 1/8/2019 7:39:00 AM
Another playful and witty little masterpiece! :)
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Date: 1/7/2019 8:08:00 AM
I was gripped with suspense and tiptoeing through your verses and no I didn't guess it! I was imagining a white haired fiend of mythical realms...This was thoroughly entertaining. I enjoyed every word!
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Ed Morris
Date: 1/7/2019 9:19:00 AM
That's the effect I was hoping for. Thanks for letting me know it worked. :-)
Date: 1/7/2019 7:09:00 AM
At last, someone who actually gets the reason I hunt crocodiles in England! Well done, Ed.
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Ed Morris
Date: 1/7/2019 9:18:00 AM
:-)

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